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ACulturedReader
ACulturedReaderLv45yr
2019-01-03 23:34

Read this story all the way to the boku no hero arc and found the plot interesting. unfortunately every character swears like a sailor. This would be fine, but the swearing is used in a way to just be there and at times it can be cringey to read. It takes away from the story and hard to imagine these characters. I tried not to give this author too much hate as i understand he is new an he recognized his mistakes later into writing this story.

The Divine Anime System

Reili
4.6
198 Chs

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WickedQueen2
WickedQueen2Lv14

It's become a lot better now I would suggest if you haven't to continue reading.

5yr
TrueImmortalDevil
TrueImmortalDevilLv6

So you basically read the prologe and then gave a bad review ... how cultured of you -.-

5yr
ACulturedReader
ACulturedReaderLv4

I am sorry, I only got to read the hero arc, but I was very interested and liked the story somewhat, but I could not get past the swearing and I had more books on my list to read. I just love reading.

5yr
ACulturedReader
ACulturedReaderLv4

Thanks for notifying me Wicked I may try it out later as I am reading some hp fanfics right now. Maybe I will give it a another go later.

5yr
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Kunnandi
KunnandiLv13

1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read it wrong also 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wondering why you still reading this 8. You see the mistake right? (on7) 10. But did you see I skipped number 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw I doubled number 10 and skipped number 9 13. And did you see I skipped number 2 14. You got tricked 15. But did you see that I skipped number 12 16. You checked and wandered why am I wasting my time on this. ( You got tricked )

6yr

UnnervedFrog
UnnervedFrogLv11

Who the **** put the tags there? What do you mean the MC isn’t willing to kill, killing is the only thing he knows. He ****ing kills everyone he doesn’t like. End of story. Maybe the he’ll break through puberty and suddenly be an angelic person in the future but not now.

6yr
fatty2shoes
fatty2shoesLv5

I have to say this is the best web novel i have read on this site. IT IS SO GOOD AND EXITING to the point were you are not ON the HYPE train you ARE THE HYPE!!! TRAIN!!!!! no but seriously this is the best webnovel i've read in a damb long time so if you haven't read it already read it NOW! ignore the haters and read it. its fantastic

6yr
OXob
OXobLv5

Why is it getting worse? Vol 1. was not bad but now it's just gone. Its like you're not even putting effort anymore. You really gotta stop rushing the story, stop writing like a robot and stop fucking skipping so much.

6yr
RekiChan
RekiChanLv12

The story was good for early chapters, but then after the first 2 anime worlds the author really like to reset the MC power level by whatever means likes starting from baby again, memory lost, different power system in new world rendering previous powers useless. The worst started after the MC enter cultivation world. Previously the MC only use less then 40 years (excluding time spent in inner world to comprehend laws that should be around 130000years) to reached Divine level 1 power level but then He was forced to enter Daodalu cultivation world where he started from 0 again and spent 910000 years to create 1 spirit ring to get to spirit elder power level which was only level 4 in a world where level 10 should be below Divine level 1. He need to create 10 spirit rings to reach the apex of the world. Each spirit ring requires 1 million years to complete, and even though he can use time law to accelerate the process it'll still take millions years to complete while other people in the same daodalu world only require 100 years to reached level 10. HOW MANY ANIME WORLDS CAN HE COMPLETE IN 10 MILLIONS YEARS!!?!?!? Previously he only took 40 years to complete 3 worlds and reach divine level 1 and now!?!? 10 million s years to reach the same power level again! This is why I hate cultivation worlds. Their sense of time are ****ed up!!!

5yr
URMOM2343
URMOM2343Lv2

It was nice at first then it started to get bad. Don't know what more to say. I think you need to put the same amount of effort you put in volume 1 in vol 2 too, Really enjoyed it even though nothing was original. Good luck on writing.

6yr
Vlad_
Vlad_Lv11

First of all, the words that the author uses hurts my brain especially because he is either using them wrong, or spelling them wrong (Common example is "your" and "you're"). Secondly, the plot that the author uses has already been used and reused and there is absolutely nothing unique about the novel. The character design is poor, turning to an unfeeling human being to a total "weeaboo" (lack of a better term) who can't say anything without sounding completely retarded. And lastly, the worlds that the story is set in may be accurate, but as I have already mentioned, there are some fan fics out there that is a better version of this one. (I remember reading one months ago where he chose the Naruto world first and has better character development, and proper grammar. Granted the novel only has about 25 chapters so far so I can't really judge the character design and world background that much but just take this fan fic with a bit of salt and be ready to hurt your brain with so many grammar mistakes and generally turning off your brain because this is only good for passing time.

6yr
ReturnToVirginity
ReturnToVirginityLv5

One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!! One of the Best Fan Fic Novel I ever read!!!

6yr
kwertyu
kwertyuLv3

don't get your hopes up it gets ruined in later chapter when he made a body for the system girl who will have the same power as him in chapter 40+ i don't recommend this you will get frustrated like hell the author is trying to fix it but it turned to none sense DONT READ IT ITS GARBAGE IT'LL MAKE YOU HATE THE AUTHOR SAME AS ME

5yr
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