WickedQueen2
I enjoy reading and writing. I'm also at uni learning game development specifically the writing aspect.I miss Nox everyday.
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I know it really doesn't matter but Artorias fought the abyss when it first appeared in Oolacile which became Farron and they used to travel from land to land fighting against the abyss until they themselves were affected.
I will preface this with saying, I want to give this a lower rating, I can't sadly because it's only one aspect that I dislike though it's arguably the most important. I am on chapter 35 now, I don't think I'll be continuing sadly because of a single thing. the MC has revealed meta knowledge, only marginally at this point but it's enough. I'll admit I mostly just hate Danzo and the root and it's clear they're gonna be important continuing forward so I'll be leaving early.Regardless of my distaste for Danzo I have an even bigger issue with the system and the far too many critical downsides.First, it takes too long between simulations, I can sort of understand this one but it's still annoying.Second and likely my biggest issue with this system, the system is limiting him in such a way that he can't use it for anything but getting simulation points as he needs them to get his natural capabilities back, most significantly with his learning abilities being hindered immensely.if everything else wasn't better by such a significant margin this story would have run into the ground on the disappointment of a system long ago.if I do come back to this and i find it better than I expected it to become i will update this review but so far i am disappointed.
Those are literally the games I've played recently and in the correct order as well, that's hilarious.
You would think that I defaulted to 5 stars but I actually tried to nitpick it. I love the character the most I think, his personality is well written and I just can't get enough of him. The writing quality is top notch, I think I spotted a few minor mistakes but nothing to complain about. The story development speaks for itself. Update stability is solid, my only wish is that there where more chapters. Finally the world background is astoundingly well done, most don't bother going as in depth on the world background early on, others tend to info dump towards the middle of the story when it suddenly becomes relevant so I'm considerably impressed. My overall thoughts are that I can't wait for more and keep up the good work, it's been a while since I found a story this well written.
my cat is called Nox and now I can't help but imagine my cat being reincarnated, the MC has a similar personality so far
funny cause that's the same as mine.
yes it screeched an almighty "rrreeeeeeeeeeeee", as a sound attack if I remember the context correctly.
I agree the author escalated it far too quickly, it's unfortunate, I feel this had a lot of potential to show off the crafting part of the story. Not gonna lie I definitely did escalate too quick, I hope as you read further it gets better, if not please berate my writing and offer feedback I really appreciate it thanks for reading!!!
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I don't feel like enough fanfics emphasise the Earn part of earn money enough. Would be cool in my opinion.
Maybe go back and add more chapters to show how those years passed, for example you could do it like a time lapse where you show key points rather than a time skip as it skips too many details. I find it fun to do that sort of thing, although you may need to re upload each chapter to get it in order so maybe do a flashback sort of time lapse, but rather than make it so he is having the flashback it is the flash or just us readers maybe put flash into a position where he is witnessing it like a movie. Sorry if this is long, I love this fanfic so I hope this has helped!!!
I know it is in poor taste to make the joke but... Madeye Moody in the making... I hope it wasn't too bad an accident and you get well soon. I love this story so I am glad you are still writing even while hurt.
I'm glad you enjoy my book. I don't actually use social media much if at all, I'm sorry if that disappoints you. When I start writing again I will see about setting up a discord, though it will be a while as I am focusing on my education right now.