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MiaoMiao11
MiaoMiao11Author6yr
2018-12-05 02:03

The Author here, at last, The novel needed my review badly. I would say it is not bad. Just the right amount of emotions: funny, suspense, revenge, drama and fluff, Maybe a bit more fluffy stuff. I loved writing it so 5 stars are justified. As for my grammar blame it on Chinese novels which I got into the habit of mtling [machine translating via our dear google translator] So the spaces and full stop........ would unfortunately stay! Yes, I am using Grammarly, unfortunately, it won't edit to perfection. Not my fault Again! :p All the Girls here it is dedicated to you! The review is just for commercial purposes only. Please don't take me as a shameless author! ~Thanks for the love~

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Jewel01
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How long is this novel?

MiaoMiao11
MiaoMiao11Author

I have no idea. :p Writing for first time. I still can't guess how many pages the plots in my head will weigh ,maybe 50-100 more chapters for now. I won't scretch it excessively.

Jewel01:How long is this novel?
ZeroDigit
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Good luck ^_^

Skully_
Skully_Lv13

Nyaa

MiaoMiao11
MiaoMiao11Author

Heya skyully Nyaa~

Skully_:Nyaa
Skully_
Skully_Lv13

REAL authors don't leave shameless reviews on their own novel! :P

MiaoMiao11:Heya skyully Nyaa~
MiaoMiao11
MiaoMiao11Author

You did not read the disclaimer scully

Skully_:REAL authors don't leave shameless reviews on their own novel! :P
Skully_
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This murder is for commercial purposes only, please police do not arrest me. I have a disclaimer.

MiaoMiao11
MiaoMiao11Author

Ye As long as nobody gets killed. Huh!

Skully_:This murder is for commercial purposes only, please police do not arrest me. I have a disclaimer.
Gurunfvr
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Yay

Gurunfvr
GurunfvrLv10

Yay

Daoist362980
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I am really intrigued to read this.

Daoist362980
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I am really intrigued to read this.

Daoist362980
Daoist362980Lv10

I am really intrigued to read this.

Naomi_Ramos
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Good luck

Honey63
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👍

Honey63
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👍

niranjana_nair
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Well said 👍👏👏

Alicia2004
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So you would recommend it

NihilisticBeauty
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well. you ended up being In a bunch of The same discord servers as me, So im just gonna...

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