Item: Reborn as a Mom
Rating: 2.4
Author: drefond

drefondLv56yr

2018-11-15 03:41

I did not read, but ... the synopsis has already pushed me too far, implies that she can not be happy without a husband and a son or that she could not have found another man ... and she abandoned them both? Why can not she keep the job and the family? the man did not support it? if he could have formed another family because she did not? I can not say, but only I feel an aversion to feminists and machismo? I do not know

Reborn as a Mom

MiaoMiao11

4.5

211 Chs

Liked by 11 people

Replies17

MiaoMiao11Author

Please try a few chapters..... Don't give up if synopsis feels Machismo... I promise it's not... The story is not exactly a career woman, reborn to be a perfect wife and mom. But the wrong decisions of the FL which she felt guilt over, I cannot change the personality directly. My FL is a strong independent woman and will always be. With the ML totally supporting her.

6yr

_moonlightLv5

That's not how the story goes. Don't give it such a low rating without reading at least one chapter first.

6yr

_moonlightLv5

Yeah, i have to agree that the synopsis is quite misleading, but at least the cover's nice.

6yr

supriyarajLv4

Nice

6yr

supriyarajLv4

Nice

6yr

ArtistaFeelLv4

Never mind, try this novel as well "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it. You can Thank me later 😊

5yr

g2msLv10

Plz don't judge the buk even without giving it a try.. the buk is really good.. Give it a shot.. I believe u won't get disappointed 😃

5yr

WhiptcreamLv3

Always read something before reviewing... otherwise you're just misleading someone. You never know what something is like until you try it! 😁

ArtistaFeel:Never mind, try this novel as well "Lyricist: Her Revenge" I'm sure you'll love it. You can Thank me later 😊

5yr

ArtistaFeelLv4

I was not reviewing. I was just replying to a reviewer. 🙂

Whiptcream:Always read something before reviewing... otherwise you're just misleading someone. You never know what something is like until you try it! 😁

5yr

WhiptcreamLv3

Oof. Sorry, I think I accidentally selected your comment before I replied. Didn't mean to.

ArtistaFeel:I was not reviewing. I was just replying to a reviewer. 🙂

5yr

ArtistaFeelLv4

It's Okay 😊

Whiptcream:Oof. Sorry, I think I accidentally selected your comment before I replied. Didn't mean to.

5yr

Kirito92cLv11

Read before reviewing 🙃

5yr

drefondLv5

bom, esse nao é uma revisao da obra e sim da sinopse. coisa que eu deixei claro na revisao eu nao quero ler, so coloquei essa revisao porque eu gosto de deixar o possivel leitor e escritor ciente do oque me afastou ou me atraiu na obra (neste caso oque me afastou e a sinopse) alem de que quando eu faço uma reviu seria eu gasto muito tempo, realmente muito tempo eu faço a sinopse para incentivar (ou afastar) o leitor e principalmente para o autor, para deixar claro oque eu acho que é ruim ( eu acho que tenho bagagem pra isso, eu acho que sei diferenciar minha opinião do meu gosto), independente desta obra ser boa ou ruim, eu acho essa sinopse ruim e pode afastar possiveis fãs que gostem do estilo (oque nao é meu cado) se estiver com duvidas entre no meu perfil e olhe uma fas minhas revisões serias e voce vai entender a diferença. thanks for read. Well, this is not a review of the work but rather of the synopsis. thing that I made clear in the review I do not want to read, I just put this review because I like to leave the possible reader and writer aware of what turned me away or attracted me to the work (in this case what turned me away and the synopsis) besides that when I do a review it would be I spend a lot of time, really a lot of time I do the synopsis to encourage (or dismiss) the reader and especially to the author, to make clear what I think is bad (I think I have luggage for this, I think I can differentiate my opinion of my taste), regardless of whether this work is good or bad, I think this synopsis is bad and can rule out possible fans who like the style (which is not mine) if you are in doubt on my profile and look at some of my serious reviews and you will understand the difference. thanks for read. but the cover is legal and the author / translator did not delete my review so at least he is respectful and conscientious

5yr

Your_Daddy1Lv4

You shouldn't leave a review good or bad on someone's work without even reading it. The author put a lot of time and effort into this story and they deserve a fair shot and review from us as readers.

5yr

drefondLv5

I went to do another review, then he mentioned this review, I came to take a second look if in fact I was being unfair, but bro 2.5 is a 5 is average is not a bad grade.

_moonlight:That's not how the story goes. Don't give it such a low rating without reading at least one chapter first.

5yr

MrSilverSnowLv13

Yeah I actually read some of this. The author says some things are just based on their values but personally it really turned me off. The writings good but I hated the message or the way the story wanted me to feel about certain topics. If you’re more into “traditional values” then you’ll enjoy this book, it’s really just a hit or miss for some people. Nothing wrong with having different opinions on things, but sometimes the story gets over shadowed making it less enjoyable.

5yr

MrSilverSnowLv13

5yr

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MiaoMiao11Author

The Author here, at last, The novel needed my review badly. I would say it is not bad. Just the right amount of emotions: funny, suspense, revenge, drama and fluff, Maybe a bit more fluffy stuff. I loved writing it so 5 stars are justified. As for my grammar blame it on Chinese novels which I got into the habit of mtling [machine translating via our dear google translator] So the spaces and full stop........ would unfortunately stay! Yes, I am using Grammarly, unfortunately, it won't edit to perfection. Not my fault Again! :p All the Girls here it is dedicated to you! The review is just for commercial purposes only. Please don't take me as a shameless author! ~Thanks for the love~

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