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ReinesseLv126yr
2018-11-23 09:16

It's sooo nice. The only thing I can siggest is don't put to much dots on your elli**is. two or three will suffice. as for 140 characters.......................

Reborn as a Mom

MiaoMiao11
4.5
211 Chs

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MiaoMiao11Author

Your suggestion taken into consideration..................... :p Thank you.

6yr
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MiaoMiao11
MiaoMiao11Author

The Author here, at last, The novel needed my review badly. I would say it is not bad. Just the right amount of emotions: funny, suspense, revenge, drama and fluff, Maybe a bit more fluffy stuff. I loved writing it so 5 stars are justified. As for my grammar blame it on Chinese novels which I got into the habit of mtling [machine translating via our dear google translator] So the spaces and full stop........ would unfortunately stay! Yes, I am using Grammarly, unfortunately, it won't edit to perfection. Not my fault Again! :p All the Girls here it is dedicated to you! The review is just for commercial purposes only. Please don't take me as a shameless author! ~Thanks for the love~

6yr

CeeCee13
CeeCee13Lv6

I am so in love with this novel. Having the ML not be an asshole or overly dominating is so different from the usual novels on here, it's really a breath of fresh air . I do like the usual cold, arrogant, dominating ML but it does get old after a while, so this novel is particularly great. I like a strong FL who breaks the stereotypical housewife role because I find that these characters don't tend to be so weak or easily manipulated by the FL. This was how the FL lived her last life but she was a bit douchey about it. Even thought she's trading in the corporate life for being a housewife I feel like she's a bit of a badass and has a way better personality now. Can't wait to see more of the main characters developing relationship, they're just so sweet together! Especially the cutey husband :)

6yr
_moonlight
_moonlightLv5

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Shuu0819
Shuu0819Lv5

Absolutely stunning. The story makes my heart beat so fast. Excellent. Oh thank you so mucg for your mass release.😍😍😍😍😍 I am very satisfied.😇 I absolutely adore your writing skills. Hehehe Bravo.!!!. Ooooh! Can I ask you something? Will you install a male rival for Viv? 😇😇😇😇😇😇

6yr
drefond
drefondLv5

I did not read, but ... the synopsis has already pushed me too far, implies that she can not be happy without a husband and a son or that she could not have found another man ... and she abandoned them both? Why can not she keep the job and the family? the man did not support it? if he could have formed another family because she did not? I can not say, but only I feel an aversion to feminists and machismo? I do not know

6yr
AoiMayu
AoiMayuLv13

I love this reincarnation story, the MC had her second chance in life and treasures it. Unlike one I’ve read before, that the mc died due to her stupidity and she’s reincarnated into a stupid self once more.! Here the MC is redeeming herself and is protective of her family.! I love how she’s valued that second chance and never wasted a moment of it.! I hope to read more of this.!

6yr
daoissssssttt
daoisssssstttLv4

Just completed reading... Stability of updates:5/5 Story development: 5/5 Character design:5/5 World background: 4/5 Here comes the top but last on my list, WRITING QUALITY I don't wanna be rude but it is really bad. The author needs an editor badly. Because most of the time I don't understand what she is trying to imply. There is no sense of grammar, tense, misuse of the commas, semicolons though I can tolerate everything except when I don't understand who's talking to who! And the worst case scenario, the author is using "enter" and "space" too much!!! Author is always forgotten to mention names when they converse. So here's some advice: 1. When you write a dialogue/conversation between characters, try to write character names first and then use colons, (eg: X:...., Y: ....), I mean we need to understand who is talking t who right? 2. If you can't afford an editor, use software like Grammarly or others. I hope it will reduce your writing mistakes. Normally I give 4.8 (which is my limit since I don't wanna be disregarded as a bot) in reviews but I couldn't to this one since I think the author needs serious help. I didn't want to be harsh because I know even a ****** review can drop a writer's motivation so, for now, I am giving you 4 star but I hope you'll correct your mistakes so I can give you another review, again. ☺☺☺

6yr
MIKMIK
MIKMIKLv5

This is the third novel i have read and like with a female protagonist......................... I've been reading novels since 2013...................... Wait a minute are those hearts i see in that girls eyes in the novels pic cause when i see anything it reminds me a LOT of stuff........................Hentai(cough)

6yr
UnjustlyUnderpaid
UnjustlyUnderpaidLv4

I actually really did enjoy the lightheartedness of what I read this far, it seems a bit strange since there seems to be almost no supernatural power in this world so the only real explanation for rebirth is a true miracle, but other than that it was enjoyable. I hope you keep doing what you’re doing and I am excited for future chapters.

6yr
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