Item: Reborn as a Mom
Rating: 4
Author: daoissssssttt

daoisssssstttLv46yr

2018-11-18 21:57

Just completed reading... Stability of updates:5/5 Story development: 5/5 Character design:5/5 World background: 4/5 Here comes the top but last on my list, WRITING QUALITY I don't wanna be rude but it is really bad. The author needs an editor badly. Because most of the time I don't understand what she is trying to imply. There is no sense of grammar, tense, misuse of the commas, semicolons though I can tolerate everything except when I don't understand who's talking to who! And the worst case scenario, the author is using "enter" and "space" too much!!! Author is always forgotten to mention names when they converse. So here's some advice: 1. When you write a dialogue/conversation between characters, try to write character names first and then use colons, (eg: X:...., Y: ....), I mean we need to understand who is talking t who right? 2. If you can't afford an editor, use software like Grammarly or others. I hope it will reduce your writing mistakes. Normally I give 4.8 (which is my limit since I don't wanna be disregarded as a bot) in reviews but I couldn't to this one since I think the author needs serious help. I didn't want to be harsh because I know even a ****** review can drop a writer's motivation so, for now, I am giving you 4 star but I hope you'll correct your mistakes so I can give you another review, again. ☺☺☺

Reborn as a Mom

MiaoMiao11

4.5

211 Chs

Liked by 5 people

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MiaoMiao11Author

Yes, I pretty much didn't have time to edit. Grammar I am bad I know. I will take your suggestion into consideration. Thank you!

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