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AlferianLv43yr
2021-02-28 16:11

I have a rating system for the fic's I review. 1--> GhostyZ? 0 stars 2--> Random author? 4-(4.5) stars. 3--> Akikan? Duh is that even a question? 5stars of course!

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DaoistSoulDiveLv4

I agree with the GhostyZ one but akkian (if I spelt wrong don't get mad) tends to drop his work to often so let's hope he continues this one like sis con and mangaka.

AlferianLv4

Yeah. That's kinda true... But well we will at least get 100+ chapters and if this one gets enough attention he might even make it mainstream as siscons climax is approaching.

DaoistSoulDive:I agree with the GhostyZ one but akkian (if I spelt wrong don't get mad) tends to drop his work to often so let's hope he continues this one like sis con and mangaka.
_oinkchanLv5

not just that, ghostyz is very overrated, ngl I don't even like his fics.

AlferianLv4

True.

_oinkchan:not just that, ghostyz is very overrated, ngl I don't even like his fics.
FinzRaizerLv11

true.. pretty much just **** book that always dropped with narcistic mc + 80% just patreon advertisement. not sure why many people like that ... i guess people taste just like that ...

_oinkchan:not just that, ghostyz is very overrated, ngl I don't even like his fics.
Ice_Wielding_RoninLv4

So Einlion is just a random Author? I personally like LastInkBender of the recently appeared Evolution System in High School of the Dead. The harem got out of his hands, but besides that the story is very good.

AlferianLv4

Bruh. Einlion has ascended. He doesn't need the reviews of us mortals.

Ice_Wielding_Ronin:So Einlion is just a random Author? I personally like LastInkBender of the recently appeared Evolution System in High School of the Dead. The harem got out of his hands, but besides that the story is very good.
S3GSLv14

Agree with GhostyZ, all of his stories are on my blacklist

WhtvrLv5

he'll drop this too

DaoistSoulDive:I agree with the GhostyZ one but akkian (if I spelt wrong don't get mad) tends to drop his work to often so let's hope he continues this one like sis con and mangaka.
GhostyZLv4

True at least I don't copy and paste other fanfics from fanfic.net like Akibot. I actually write Originals.

Whtvr:he'll drop this too
AlferianLv4

Did I say you can't copy? Just copy a whole damn copyrighted novel for all I care and don't be a bitch.

GhostyZ:True at least I don't copy and paste other fanfics from fanfic.net like Akibot. I actually write Originals.
IDontLikeThisShitLv14

I agree with the ghostyZ that guy fanfic is like tv advertisement almost half of his post in his fanfic is telling people to join his patreon. Hahha lols. Greedy as ****.

AKARYUULv14

What original most of your chapters are advertisiments to rip off money or other shiit.And the chapter that u released are trash

GhostyZ:True at least I don't copy and paste other fanfics from fanfic.net like Akibot. I actually write Originals.
AKARYUULv14

By ur definition every fanfic writer steals as its not original.Nothing in this world is really original. Take vampire if u change characteristics powers it diesnt change that someone thought up it and every one uses it.same with every over this system/reincarnation and so on. Everyone uses this thing it doesnt mean stealing.

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GhostyZLv4

Your life is trash.

AKARYUU:What original most of your chapters are advertisiments to rip off money or other shiit.And the chapter that u released are trash
AKARYUULv14

My life ii normal but that thing that u advertise is pure trash as u cant read it as most of it is not even chapter and that is,is boring uninteresting. And if u were normal person i even dont say author as u are not u wouldnt write such shiit but normal reply.

GhostyZ:Your life is trash.
NiozomiLv3

What about lord Erosire then?...

AKARYUU:My life ii normal but that thing that u advertise is pure trash as u cant read it as most of it is not even chapter and that is,is boring uninteresting. And if u were normal person i even dont say author as u are not u wouldnt write such shiit but normal reply.
AlferianLv4

Bruh, do you even think his mind has enough capability to think about such things? His mind is filled with dark things bruh...crazy dark things I might add and of course, his advertisements makes me puke.

AKARYUU:My life ii normal but that thing that u advertise is pure trash as u cant read it as most of it is not even chapter and that is,is boring uninteresting. And if u were normal person i even dont say author as u are not u wouldnt write such shiit but normal reply.
CockroaChanLv12

Hello..........................................................why everyone fighting i just wanna know does this ff english super fking trash like other or better.

AlferianLv4

As the owner and lord of this review! I can assure you that the Fan-Fic is good.

CockroaChan:Hello..........................................................why everyone fighting i just wanna know does this ff english super fking trash like other or better.
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Daoist591682Lv5
GodackLv2

Writing Quality: 3*: The grammar is fine but because the way the story is written I have to give it 3*. Why? I will have to share how interpret how this story is written. [Main character meets an important character: main character-sanchankunkohai please call me idiot-samakunsanchanniinee] I just can't read the story normally. Updates are fine. Story development 3*. The beginning started out fine but then it just stagnated, it took multiple chapters for one day where I felt like there wasn't even much plot development besides the obvious ranting of the main character. Character design 2*. I liked the prospect of the main character but it all came crashing down when he started interacting with his surroundings. At first I though that that aunt person would be the only one but then it just became worse and worse untill I coun't read any further. World background 2*. In the couple dozen chapters I've read I haven't really learned anything significant about how the world works and what it actually is, my initial guess was that it was an original world with characters from anime etc but then apperantly it was a cliche anime world full of 2d cardboard characters that filled the world. Total score 3.0*. Now don't start saying that I am bad mouthing the story because I will admit that I am doing it but it is still a review on my opinion of the story, but this is in no way trying to discourage you from reading as you have your onw opinion and weird fetishes(though you have to have some weird and sick mind to like such fetishes[Opinion]) so don't start hating. Now my personal opinion: this story is just another generic cliche (Harem/romance/r-18) story on this cursed website that will be long forgotten after the author either drops it or finishes it.

GinOokamiLv14

I was going to wait until the end of this fanfic or at least by the end of chapter 500 to write a review, but I've been bottling up something that I think I should let it out here instead of the comment section. My overall rating may looked bad, but trust me, I don't hate this fanfic nor Akikan. I just hope that I don't offend a lot of people because of this. Also, I don't follow Akikan's siscon fanfic, so I'm basing/comparing this fanfic from his first one. Akikan's writing definitely improved from his first work. But there's this combination of words that he always uses in almost all of his paragraph, and that is "He had to admit." I get that being a non-native English speaker, it is difficult to choose different phrases to express something similar in meaning, but reading it over and over is irritating. Akikan did say that this fanfiction is very slow on its story development. People had speak out about this in the past. So, instead of saying the same thing, I'm going to let my star rating speaks for itself. Now, character design. After chapter 200, I'm beginning to hate this main character. The fact that he said to himself that he won't indulge in romance or anything similar before he finishes writing his obviously plagiarized title from the real world, but still did it anyway, irks me to no end. I won't care as much when a character becomes somewhat of a hypocrite in a story with a not snail-like speed on its story development. But bruh, the timeline in this story hasn't even reach six months, yet he catches women left and right like his story is about to end. Unless you're aiming for women with a garden opened for any male that's passing by, women can wait for a month or two. Heck, he even write the plagiarized story as his novel within a night. Surely letting your little brother stay in your pants for just a week isn't that hard. The update stability for this fanfiction is on point. There's nothing other than praises for this one. I say Akikan did a good job. Even after 200+ chapters, the world hasn't been expanded except for a couple of places. You would think that getting huge amounts of shares of different companies for free is going to help building the world, making it more interesting. But nope, those companies are just names for now. I guess Akikan would rather slap more characters from other fiction than Sakurasou and hope that it builds the world he's using instead of introducing places with unique situations. After writing about 2000+ words on this review, I guess the person who reads this got the message that, although I don't hate this fanfic, I don't like it either. I don't have any expectations for this novel, and I'm not confident that he would read this. The main character will most likely add more women to his ever expanding harem, and whines about how his heart couldn't at least love one of them. Personally, I will continue to read this fanfic, but I won't give a stone/day for this. Maybe a couple/week is enough to help this stay on the 'leaderboard' of webnovel... not like my stone is going to change anything.

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