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FraudsterLv13yr
2021-02-28 14:56

As long as it's Akikan's work then it's absolute top quality. Also please don't drop this one Akikan-san. Many of your novels have been drop and now I'm still waiting for you to update them.

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WhtvrLv5

he'll drop this too

CodezLLv4

in all his stories the mc is absolute garbage and a hypocrite.

FraudsterLv1

Well, can't deny that one.

CodezL:in all his stories the mc is absolute garbage and a hypocrite.
DemonPinkQueenLv10

Is this a harem?

Yuri_yuriLv4

👍

DemonPinkQueen:Is this a harem?
ClosedPervertLv13

is that even a question? it's Akikan's novel we talk about 😂🤣

DemonPinkQueen:Is this a harem?
DeathKorpsOfKriegLv5

i've foreseen the future and i'm sad to say that it is bleak

Tsukishima_asahiLv1

Novel sis con tidak sebaik itu

catlavaLv2

can you review my story please?

ReaderLoveLv14

Author is a scum like the Mc, Author is blatantly copying another author work and adding some of his ideas and naming it his. Pathetic, this is why I felt the novel was copied from someone else especially since the Mc alway changing his personality too much and randomly like if the author switched sometime. Got this info from here.

Daoistf7el0ULv1

Ini adalah fanfic jadi bebas, setiap penulis fanfic juga butuh inspirasi untuk novelnya jadi diamlah dan baca.

ReaderLove:Author is a scum like the Mc, Author is blatantly copying another author work and adding some of his ideas and naming it his. Pathetic, this is why I felt the novel was copied from someone else especially since the Mc alway changing his personality too much and randomly like if the author switched sometime. Got this info from here.
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FennLv12

so you saying copying another people work is fine? what a r3tard lol

Daoistf7el0U:Ini adalah fanfic jadi bebas, setiap penulis fanfic juga butuh inspirasi untuk novelnya jadi diamlah dan baca.
Robert_RogueLv4

we all are hypocrites in one way or another so it doesn't really matter.

CodezL:in all his stories the mc is absolute garbage and a hypocrite.
CodezLLv4

yes, but we are at different levels, and I said that those protagonists are ABSOLUTE GARBAGE.

Robert_Rogue:we all are hypocrites in one way or another so it doesn't really matter.
ICopiedandPasted0Lv3

I haven't read either but a system, a similar cast of characters, painting and cooking skills, and setting/where MC lives being the same would be pretty normal in a fan fic. And if both authors are able to go into the personalities shown in the original work well enough than both would naturally have similar side character reactions. Of course I'm not defending plagiarizing but similarities in fan fics isn't something that should be used towards a conclusion that's probably not accurate especially with such indefinite points.

ReaderLove:Author is a scum like the Mc, Author is blatantly copying another author work and adding some of his ideas and naming it his. Pathetic, this is why I felt the novel was copied from someone else especially since the Mc alway changing his personality too much and randomly like if the author switched sometime. Got this info from here.
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ICopiedandPasted0Lv3

I won't lie I was 100% defending the author since I read another one of his and was liking it but I wasn't trying to defend plagiarizing. I think plagiarizing another person's work is awful and if akikan really did it then I think I might not read his stories in the future but relating to fanfics and saying one is plagiarizng the other is like saying every ninja related story is a plagiarization of Naruto (example is a bit embellished but I think you get the point). And again I haven't read either this book since I was looking at the reviews fist or the other one you said this novel was plagiarizing from so it might really be true and that akikan did plagiarize from the other (of course saying so that the other story and it's chapters we're published before akikans).

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Mustafa_FerhatLv1

no one else is here and I am going to be late to the charger for your phone call me when you get a chance please let me know what

TrAInslatorLv13

The glazing goes crazy

Christopher_6069Lv2

yes i agree that it doesn't. truth is subjective. math isn't. is there an equation or calculation in the novel? can beat Goku?

Robert_Rogue:we all are hypocrites in one way or another so it doesn't really matter.
masterkiritojjLv2

Is there Yuri in this novel?

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GodackLv2

Writing Quality: 3*: The grammar is fine but because the way the story is written I have to give it 3*. Why? I will have to share how interpret how this story is written. [Main character meets an important character: main character-sanchankunkohai please call me idiot-samakunsanchanniinee] I just can't read the story normally. Updates are fine. Story development 3*. The beginning started out fine but then it just stagnated, it took multiple chapters for one day where I felt like there wasn't even much plot development besides the obvious ranting of the main character. Character design 2*. I liked the prospect of the main character but it all came crashing down when he started interacting with his surroundings. At first I though that that aunt person would be the only one but then it just became worse and worse untill I coun't read any further. World background 2*. In the couple dozen chapters I've read I haven't really learned anything significant about how the world works and what it actually is, my initial guess was that it was an original world with characters from anime etc but then apperantly it was a cliche anime world full of 2d cardboard characters that filled the world. Total score 3.0*. Now don't start saying that I am bad mouthing the story because I will admit that I am doing it but it is still a review on my opinion of the story, but this is in no way trying to discourage you from reading as you have your onw opinion and weird fetishes(though you have to have some weird and sick mind to like such fetishes[Opinion]) so don't start hating. Now my personal opinion: this story is just another generic cliche (Harem/romance/r-18) story on this cursed website that will be long forgotten after the author either drops it or finishes it.

GinOokamiLv14

I was going to wait until the end of this fanfic or at least by the end of chapter 500 to write a review, but I've been bottling up something that I think I should let it out here instead of the comment section. My overall rating may looked bad, but trust me, I don't hate this fanfic nor Akikan. I just hope that I don't offend a lot of people because of this. Also, I don't follow Akikan's siscon fanfic, so I'm basing/comparing this fanfic from his first one. Akikan's writing definitely improved from his first work. But there's this combination of words that he always uses in almost all of his paragraph, and that is "He had to admit." I get that being a non-native English speaker, it is difficult to choose different phrases to express something similar in meaning, but reading it over and over is irritating. Akikan did say that this fanfiction is very slow on its story development. People had speak out about this in the past. So, instead of saying the same thing, I'm going to let my star rating speaks for itself. Now, character design. After chapter 200, I'm beginning to hate this main character. The fact that he said to himself that he won't indulge in romance or anything similar before he finishes writing his obviously plagiarized title from the real world, but still did it anyway, irks me to no end. I won't care as much when a character becomes somewhat of a hypocrite in a story with a not snail-like speed on its story development. But bruh, the timeline in this story hasn't even reach six months, yet he catches women left and right like his story is about to end. Unless you're aiming for women with a garden opened for any male that's passing by, women can wait for a month or two. Heck, he even write the plagiarized story as his novel within a night. Surely letting your little brother stay in your pants for just a week isn't that hard. The update stability for this fanfiction is on point. There's nothing other than praises for this one. I say Akikan did a good job. Even after 200+ chapters, the world hasn't been expanded except for a couple of places. You would think that getting huge amounts of shares of different companies for free is going to help building the world, making it more interesting. But nope, those companies are just names for now. I guess Akikan would rather slap more characters from other fiction than Sakurasou and hope that it builds the world he's using instead of introducing places with unique situations. After writing about 2000+ words on this review, I guess the person who reads this got the message that, although I don't hate this fanfic, I don't like it either. I don't have any expectations for this novel, and I'm not confident that he would read this. The main character will most likely add more women to his ever expanding harem, and whines about how his heart couldn't at least love one of them. Personally, I will continue to read this fanfic, but I won't give a stone/day for this. Maybe a couple/week is enough to help this stay on the 'leaderboard' of webnovel... not like my stone is going to change anything.

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