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Cepheus_7439Lv43yr
2021-02-16 18:25

This book has so many plot holes and illogical that it sickens me...... The FL uses her power with no restrain.....she cuts 10 valuable jade on spot woth so many people present just to show off however she doesn’t consider her disguise has many problems such as fingerprints,height,hair etc so anyone puts effort in catching her alias can easily find her..... She steals a illigal gun and goes to another city via plane but ML does not suspect how she bypassed airport security.... She as a normal 18 hear girl who knows no fighting can defeat pro military but no one even considers her as a terrorist because it would be impossible to be trained to such an extent without coaching..... I hate how she treats ML because she often teases him such as ‘who knows if you will change’ etc and then she feels guilty for working him up because ML is flustered because he doesn’t know how to prove himself but she never stops saying such things and makes him insecure..... There is someone chasing her in front of ML but she doesn’t keep too mich distance....She made it clear that she loves ML but he doesn’t give up but she still treats him as a friend to keep connections... When MC is jealous she is Iile ‘don’t you trust me?’ i mean how can ML feel secure when you keep contacting a love rival, eating with love rival and also saying those things...... She says that she will kill ML if he betrays her (don’t you trust him) even when ML does everything he can to show that he loves her(taking care to government issues, getting her lisensed gun,ready to give all his wealth to her,never having any contact with any women of any age except her,ready to introduce her to his family, also bearing the fact that her friend is his love rival).... But she cannot even make him feel secure and he doesn’t even say anything about breakup, betraying etc.... She doesn’t allow him to meet her family, doesn’t tell about her enemies,doesn’t even reveal non-magical secrets...... Here we have ML who is ready to give his life for her and a FL who doesn’t even give basic trust to him.......

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wowdl
wowdlLv4

I also think so. everytime FL saying that I'm not showing off but everytime showing off more to everyone even not necessary

Niddhi_Sahu
Niddhi_SahuLv2

I don't think she has any normal day in her life after reincarnation

wowdl:I also think so. everytime FL saying that I'm not showing off but everytime showing off more to everyone even not necessary
akhaw_pansa
akhaw_pansaLv13

now i don't want to read this novel. i was considering giving this novel a try after reading some chapters of the comic version but knowing that female lead doesn't give some security to the ML in their relationship, I'm not interested. i love reading novels where both ML and FL have mutual understandings, give each other security in their relationship, having faith and trust in each other and doesn't hide anything from each other.

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