This is my first comment and im the type of reader that usually stays silent and create an account for the sole purpose of reading. I know that author would probably critizise me (like seriously i have read some of the bad reviews and none of them is heartfully accepted by the author which kinda ticks me off since most of what they write is kinda true or similar to what i have in mind). So moving on to the reviews, like most people said it starts off quite well in the first 100 chapters but quickly goes downhill as girls quickly fall for him for no apparent reasons (except for some of them), probably the moment they met tiona, aiz and others from the loki familia. I understand if its only Tiona since she is an amazon, but for the others like aiz to fall for him so quickly is kinda inconsistent with their canon characteristics which kinda disappoints me. It also disappoints me that author makes all the notable girls in that world to fall for him and makes the story terrible as there are too many girls falling for him and making the story goes out of hand. Moreover, since vahn is still in his first world i can’t imagine how bad it will be when he goes to other worlds and have all the girls throwing themselves at him like whores and taking all the notable girls within that world like danmachi ones. I think author has some talent for writing action since the action scenes are really quite good in my opinion so i think its a shame for the author to drop the action and focus solely on slice of life. Author also have good writing skills and grammar since they are easy to read and understand with only very few mistakes.
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You know, I wish you would at least try to come up with something concrete, or at least original. Almost everything you say is just an exaggeration to try and prove an almost non-existent point. It's like anti-vaxxers who literally just look for the **** that validates their claims and then you go on a tirade about it like you have an obligation to do so. First and foremost, you're complaining about a harem in a novel with the harem tag. Secondly, you say things like 'most reviews, most people', and this isn't even mentioning that your start your whole diatribe by literally taking a personal stance and calling out the Author. You're quite literally just being a patsy to the negative reviews that got your jimmies pitching a tent, saying almost nothing constructive for the author, or beneficial for the readers. You're saying it's inconsistent with their canon characters, when the novel takes place before canon. You're saying that Ais, who literally got interested in Bell to the point that she started searching for information on him after the fact isn't the type to take an interest in things, especially when it is a younger and more impressionable version of herself. And of course you can't 'imagine' how other worlds would be, because you're so lost in your own little world that anything that requires complex thought it simply beyond you. Since I take pity on you, I'll explain it VERY simply, though I fear even that may be out of your reach. Vahn is broken. He had a lot of issues to overcome at the beginning of the story. These get addressed during his stay in Danmachi. In future worlds, even though your literal thirty-seven brain cells probably can't imagine such a thing, he HAS NO REASON TO BUILD A HAREM. I'm sure, in that little fragmentary consciousness that is budding within your pea-sized brain, that is hard to believe, but it is actually VERY EASY to understand. By the time he goes into other worlds, he will have already grown up, matured, and even have a very extended family. It wouldn't make sense for him to seek out other women since the whole fucking meaning in his life at that point is to return to his fucking family. Because you're actually just a fucking pervert that can't wrap his head around basic logical developments, I know it is hard to imagine that Vahn wouldn't really feel attracted to girls that might be younger than his fucking grandchildren. As for the last comment you make, this is exactly how you should structure things if you want to provide genuine critique. Word choice, small compliments, not being an asshole, these are the very ****** steps that most people never take when writing their 'reviews'. However, though I appreciate the feedback in this final segment, everything preceding it was literally you just regurgitating what people you agreed with said, not an actual review. You literally just jumped on a bandwagon and played the patsy of other people, serving almost no other purpose. I will reiterate what I said previously, as you seem to think the action segments are interesting, the slice-of-life is important to build Vahn as character. Almost all future worlds will have a much bigger focus on action, because Vahn HAS A REASON to act, which is returning to his family. I go through a lot of effort explaining almost everything, including the reasons why people act the way they do, and you should have been able to notice that if you were actually paying attention to the story. So many of you people just focus on the 'oh, I don't like the harem, boohoohoo' aspect, that you completely fucking ignore everything else. Seriously though, if the only fucking point you are trying to make it 'something you read other people say', what the **** is your actual point? Why parrot things that are already out there? What purpose does it serve other than showing you lack the insight and creativity to give input of your own? I seriously can't fucking fathom what goes through the minds of you people x
Well i think my brain do have some problems since here i am replying to a puny minded author that doesn’t accept bad reviews. Heck, you even criticize me for saying good things which is kinda brainless since i am only stating my positive and negative viewpoints. Instead of taking it constructively you just had to view everything personally with your high ego huh. You just don’t get it do you, the reason many people states the same thing is because we all share the same view and definitely is a problem which should be taken a point of instead of yapping to the reviewers who are just stating their viewpoints. Well i’ll just stop here since i hate to waste more time typing comments that would just end up in circles and pointless since author just can’t take any bad things regarding his novel.
So far from the reviews I read, author doesn't like criticism.
Quite true! I tired to leave a 3 star review like this a few days ago and it was Deleted.
I agree with you. He is a good writer. However, EVERY single girl in the story is HOT for the MC. It is fine when it is a few or several girls. There are almost no normal girls or guys in the story. All but 2 of his entire guild (Familia) is made up of his Harem of girls that are chasing after him or sleeping with him.
ha try retaliating without going on an insult spree lmfao how short of a temper do u have whats the point of being an author if u cant even right back without a full para of insulting.
Can anyone reply if Is he using Clone??..I read something about the MC using Clone To s*x with his harem...
sheesh, a trash author who can't even take criticism. no wonder you're here years later still writing trash.
