only got to chapter 3 but could not stand the horrible grammer. I would not read it if I were you. instead, read one of the many other zombie novels on here.
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Well if you're a person looking for a book to proofread webnovel is not for you.. many author and translator are making "mistakes or having trouble with grammars and spelling" you only read 3 chapters and you're judging it already stating it's not a good novel because of grammar?? True readers are not after grammar but story contents..
fair enough here's my other problem with the story it not only has bad grammar but also is uninspired unrealistic and ultimately not worth continuing to read. frankly, I would have given it a better score if not for the fact that I could not stand the fact that it expects the reader to believe that a convenience store is pimped out with a getaway tunnel guns grenades and land mines IN JAPAN the last countries in the world when it comes to gun-related anything. the author knows nothing of the culture he's writing about except from anime and manga yet chose to write about it, it's a goddamn insult. the reaction of the protagonist is 2 dimensional he is cold and uncaring yet wants to go fight through a horde of zombies to save a girl he keeps pushing away from himself. it's so god damn unrealistic and yet wants to be science fiction. at least with a story like Stronghold In The Apocalypse the author embraces the fact that the story doesn't have substance and instead has it reads as a chaotic ride along, that also periodically intentionally or not makes humorist satire of a lot of preexisting concepts found in the system and zombie media.
polaris0989:Well if you're a person looking for a book to proofread webnovel is not for you.. many author and translator are making "mistakes or having trouble with grammars and spelling" you only read 3 chapters and you're judging it already stating it's not a good novel because of grammar?? True readers are not after grammar but story contents..
Fine that's your opinion.. anyways it's a fictional story so it doesnt need to be the truth or real..
ATCkit:fair enough here's my other problem with the story it not only has bad grammar but also is uninspired unrealistic and ultimately not worth continuing to read. frankly, I would have given it a better score if not for the fact that I could not stand the fact that it expects the reader to believe that a convenience store is pimped out with a getaway tunnel guns grenades and land mines IN JAPAN the last countries in the world when it comes to gun-related anything. the author knows nothing of the culture he's writing about except from anime and manga yet chose to write about it, it's a goddamn insult. the reaction of the protagonist is 2 dimensional he is cold and uncaring yet wants to go fight through a horde of zombies to save a girl he keeps pushing away from himself. it's so god damn unrealistic and yet wants to be science fiction. at least with a story like Stronghold In The Apocalypse the author embraces the fact that the story doesn't have substance and instead has it reads as a chaotic ride along, that also periodically intentionally or not makes humorist satire of a lot of preexisting concepts found in the system and zombie media.
this is just a fiction and I never said it is inspired in real-life Japan. And by the way, this novel has no system, only zombies. And I know about the fact that Japan has a lot of firearms ban. And I don't really mind your criticisms about this novel. I am writing to my readers because many enjoyed it. If you don't like my novel, well, it's your opinion. There are lots of novels out there about zombies, go ahead and read them.
Go back to school kid, and learn SOME grammar at least. Your writing is an insult. Your refusal to learn is revealing. With just a few afternoons of studying a few grammar rules, or even "cheating" and using a grammar checker, would solve 80% of the issues. There are just TOO MANY: This is not about some typos, this is about stupidity and ignorance.
Kyosei:this is just a fiction and I never said it is inspired in real-life Japan. And by the way, this novel has no system, only zombies. And I know about the fact that Japan has a lot of firearms ban. And I don't really mind your criticisms about this novel. I am writing to my readers because many enjoyed it. If you don't like my novel, well, it's your opinion. There are lots of novels out there about zombies, go ahead and read them.
What nonsense are you spouting trash!? He already mentioned that the novel has grammar issues and if you don't like it, then read other novels. You are insanely unprofessional and so destructive with your comment. Why don't you create your own novel if you think you're so good with the learning stuff. Fooking idiot!
LionessLover:Go back to school kid, and learn SOME grammar at least. Your writing is an insult. Your refusal to learn is revealing. With just a few afternoons of studying a few grammar rules, or even "cheating" and using a grammar checker, would solve 80% of the issues. There are just TOO MANY: This is not about some typos, this is about stupidity and ignorance.
