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thanks for the correction, I didn't notice it lacks the letter H
there is a possibility of romance but it will only have a single female lead. This will not become a harem
that's a typo, I already changed it back to neck, if I recall correctly unless it isn't reflecting yet
don't worry, I just added a few tiers in the privilege that's why they are not yet released. Wait for it a bit before they will be released soon, so no need to be alarmed
It might take a while since we are still not getting to the arc yet. The egg will be an important asset in the next arc so I still have not put out a mention on it yet, but it won't take long. Thank you for reading!
Hahaha, as I stated before, this is not a harem. No matter how many girls pop up in the story like mushrooms, they are not potential candidates for the MC. Unless I specify who it was.
Yes, I agree with you. Some parts of the story needs a complete rewrite since some are just very confusing that even I got confused when I proofread it. I already noted the chapters that needed complete revision and those that only need a slight revision so rest assured I am already working on them.
Thank you for the review. I appreciate the honest and thorough reviews like this. And yes, there will be future chapters that will show how the MC fight before in the past timeline. As for the parents, I didn't forget about them, I already made the chapter about the result of the investigation but it was not yet published and was sitting in the drafts for now. Thank you for the critical review, have a good day!
thank you for the review, yes I am aware of the inconsistencies and was already writing some of the chapter rewrites to at least get rid of what caused those plotholes. And thank you for enjoying the novel despite it's flaws, I appreciate it. Have a good day.
Thank you for the review. Don't worry, I am not offended and critical reviews are welcome. I am sorry that my story didn't go to your liking but I am thankful you have seen some potential to it. Thanks for typing a review and have a nice day.