To be honest, I didn't have the highest expectations when I was reading this. Turns out, personally I find that reading this is way more enjoyable than most post apocalyptic scenarios I've read. The MC is naturally a overpowered killing machine from the start of the story, he meets new people throughout but right now I barely see much development of the characters as we progress. The most I see is their basic backstories of why they are here or "Oh no! How will we survive? We can't let MC carry us, etc" I hope that as I get further into the story we would further expand on backgrounds of characters and their past lives. Another thing to mention is the writing quality, some sentences are badly written missing proper grammar (Barely Readable, hope you fix it or find a editor lol), with the cliche enemy rises because MC didn't finish him off and he becomes stronger trope (but at least he is strong enough to pull off situations and look bad ass,). If you can ignore these aspects of this novel and looking for a new zombie type of novel definitely try it out.
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yeah, I am aware of many wrong sentences and I am sorry if it is barely readable. I have lots of things to do in real life and writing is something I do for fun. Editing the mistakes would take a while because I am not always on the screen to edit everything. Still, thank you for the feedback. As for the characters, yes there would be character developments in the story soon. I just didn't put them yet because of the time span the story is currently in right now which would make it too early. All characters would be having character developments and even the dead characters' backstories would be connected to the future plot. For now, please bear for the horrible grammar at the moment because English is not my main language.
No worries, I'll be sticking around to read your novel! This has great potential!
