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GeezAmy
GeezAmyLv56yr
2018-08-02 02:47

I have found a gem. I love transmigration novel and strong MC and cute little kid and this one takes the cake. From all the novel I have read so far this is very well written and is an original work. You got to give this novel a read and you will without a doubt be hooked.

My Beautiful Commander

neha_
4.4
196 Chs

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neha_
neha_Author

It's the first time someone praised my novel as a gem.. My heart is floating and I am so happy.. Thank you so much for your wonderful review.. I will try hard to give you a good story.. Thank you for your wonderful review

6yr
GeezAmy
GeezAmyLv5

Your story had hit all the points that I like and the fluffy moments are just so cute. I just can’t stop reading, and couldn't wait to read more. Forever your fan.

neha_:It's the first time someone praised my novel as a gem.. My heart is floating and I am so happy.. Thank you so much for your wonderful review.. I will try hard to give you a good story.. Thank you for your wonderful review
6yr
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neha_
neha_Author

Thank you so much.. hehe.. *wink*

GeezAmy:Your story had hit all the points that I like and the fluffy moments are just so cute. I just can’t stop reading, and couldn't wait to read more. Forever your fan.
6yr
xuxian
xuxianLv14

Dear author, can I know approximately how many chapters this novel have?

neha_:It's the first time someone praised my novel as a gem.. My heart is floating and I am so happy.. Thank you so much for your wonderful review.. I will try hard to give you a good story.. Thank you for your wonderful review
6yr
jhunia
jhuniaLv5

I like the story of this novel. Looking forward for a new chapter to be release soon. I ended up reading on the notice.

6yr
marywhite23
marywhite23Lv4

I love this story so it is most wonderful novel I have read so far nice work

6yr
bebelgam
bebelgamLv4

yes this is fascinating story luv every plot ... thank u neha_

6yr
Other Reviews
LadyVannadium
LadyVannadiumLv4

My ghaaad! this story is so interesting! pls. release more chapters. I really love the story esp. the main character. The development of the story is good the grammar and the every word use is good Overall. Good! Thumbs up ! The two siblings are very cute and they're so sweet ! hahaha I look forward to this

6yr

aimej
aimejLv15

Strong female MC ✔ Handsome & a bit innocent ML (who has never fall in love before 😂) ✔ Cute & adorable baby bro ✔ Cheecky brothers ✔ And a hell lot of a** kickin' moves by MC... Pricelessss 😍😍😍😍 Getting in love with this story. One of my accidental discoveries. Give it a try and you won't regret it. Caiyok author nim. You have turn me into a fan of yours. All the best. *Stability update ia just 4 at the mo cos I am a new reader of this story. Will update it once i got an idea of the author's updating mode. 😉

6yr
Akaira
AkairaLv5

I really really LOVE this novel. The characters are amazing. The FemMC is not dumb. She's very smart and really strong. I always love strong MCs. The Male Lead's Family is so adorable. The FemMC's little brother is also adorable. When they appear in a chapter, it just gives me this fuzzy warm feeling inside. The ML is strong as well so that's always good. I love his brother. I love his sister. I love his father. I love his mother. His mother is awesome. Let me correct that, his family is awesome. All of them are already in the ship eventhough we are still building the ship for our couple here 😂. So that's why they're awesome. If I were you stop reading the reviews here now and start reading this treasure. You will never regret reading it. (Shameless 5* review hoping to motivate the author so I get more chapters to read............)

6yr
Maggiee
MaggieeLv4

Interesting story! Keep it up!!! Thanks for your hard work. I always read your novel and waiting for more chapters !!! Many many thanks 👍😄

6yr
Reading_Otaku
Reading_OtakuLv5

It is good but not as good as the translated novels. The dialogues sounded awkward at times. I am not really one with describing but I can say that this is almost on par with those originals in wattpad. Examples are "Yes, I do(n't)" and "The Empress". This is only my opinion so if you really want to know, it is better to read it yourself.

6yr
ChocoLatte
ChocoLatteLv13

I like how the story goes and all. Just that I hope it's not one of those long story with thousand over chapters. I kind of wish the FL&ML will meet each other again(I'm at ch40)

6yr
Lilyeddy
LilyeddyLv5

Omg!! My favourite character is strong mc btw three chapter is not enough for me, it seems I already addicted 😂 and keep up good work author 😁

6yr
Ginabut
GinabutLv5

Pretty good novel its practically your female cliche heroine novel but its not cringe worthy compared to other stereotype heroine, its decent as of now that is

6yr
Mocka
MockaLv4

I like this novel so far 😄 Cool MC , hondsome ML And cute little brother 😉 Can't wait for the MC and ML to meet again and to know how the're going to do to develop their feelings for each other 💗💗💗

6yr
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