webnovel

My Beautiful Commander

Author: neha_
History
Ongoing · 13M Views
  • 196 Chs
    Content
  • 4.4
    1.3K ratings
  • NO.200+
    SUPPORT
Synopsis

Xia Lian, a 21st century military doctor died in an explosion and found herself transmigrated to the body a 12 year girl. Her mother died and her father abandoned her and her little brother for another woman. But she strives to provide a bright future for her younger brother and herself. She slowly makes herself stronger so that no one can bully her and her brother. Many admire her for her strong and free personality. Even the cold and aloof general falls head over heals for her, but she does not accept love as she only has her brother in her eyes. But he does not give up as he realized that he is in love with this weird and strong woman. Note: Pic credits goes to Webnovel team. The story is set in a fictional era.. Release rate: 14 chps/week Connect with me on Discord: neha_#4373 https://discord.gg/FhuJQwk

Tags
4 tags
Chapter 1A Dreadful Night

Bone-shattering pain !

That was all Xia Lian could feel all over her body. She was perplexed that she could still feel something. She should have been mince meat by now, that was what she thought when the bomb exploded consuming all the light and life out of her tough soldier's body.

Her last minutes at the war played in her mind like a twenty four reels movie. Her squad three under her leadership, charged into the front-lines to form a diversion to confuse the enemies.

When the diversion is successfully created, the squad two comes into the play. That was the plan anyway. But, reality proved that not all things go according to the plan. The enemy was fully prepared for their attack as if they knew what was going to happen beforehand.

Xia Lian was the head strategist and the major. Her strategies were always on the mark and there was no failure in her career, not till today. Now that things are clear she was sure that there was a mole among them and she hated herself for not being careful and for putting her teammates life in immediate danger.

But her only relief is that she ordered her squad to retreat when she noticed the bomb. They blindly followed her orders, not knowing the exact scenario. Her team would follow her in life and death, without second thoughts and she was truly grateful for that. That is the reason why she didn't want others to die and used her own life to protect theirs.

She could almost imagine the rampage her team is on at this moment after her death. She knew how her death will impact them. The only thing which made her to feel at peace is that she is an orphan and that she didn't leave anyone alone, the only exception being her team. Nothing could be done now, but the thing which confused her the most is the pain which she is feeling. Did she probably by a stroke of luck escape with a thin thread of life from that deadly explosion?

Xia Lian was sure that she died in the explosion but the almost numbing pain on her body is making it difficult to breathe. The slow and painful heaving of her chest proved the fact that she is alive.

She slowly moved her eyelids and opened her eyes only to be greeted with an endless pit of darkness. Darkness.. She could feel nothing but darkness around her. Slowly moving her upper body, she felt a weight pressing down on her.

She slowly lowered her head and she froze after realising that there is something, or someone on her body!

There was a young boy in her embrace..

' What the hell?' Xia Lian is stunned and she blinked her eyes to make sure that she is not hallucinating. Slowly, her eyes adjusted to the darkness around her and now the images of her surroundings became clearer than ever.

While looking at her surroundings she only found a desolate place with shrubs and bushes. Where in the world was she now?

Xia Lian's mind hummed.

Her heart was racing and she couldn't calm down.

She then examined her body only to realise that her body was entirely different from before. Her hands looked frail and thin. Her legs actually looked many inches shorter than her original body.

It was at that moment that the shocking realisation dawned on her. She was in an entirely new body and more over she was in the body of an young girl.

Well, she was given a second chance and she was going to live her life to the fullest now. The past is past and future is unknown. So, why fret now and ruin the present? With these ' always be positive and think positive' thoughts in her mind, Xia Lian felt determined to live.

'But, who is this little boy? Is he related to this body somehow?' she wondered.

He looked about three years old at the most. She found it cute that this kid fainted on top of her while holding her tightly. Xia Lian tilted her head to look at his face.

After looking at that face, Xia Lin felt a sharp pain in her head and the images and memories of their past started to flow in her mind.

Their father Xia Jiang, a government official, married their mother Hua Ming Yu for the wealth of Hua family. She and her brother Xia Ming were born. But after few years the Hua family completely fell into ruins and lost all their wealth.

At that time the concubine Lin Rong schemed for the position of main wife and convinced Xia Jiang to eliminate them to obtain their wealth. After her persuasion Xia Jiang hired assassins to kill their mother. The result was the three of them fleeing for several days before the mother was hit by a poisoned arrow.

But even in this hopeless situation their mother hid both of them in bushes and put Hua family pendants on their necks. She placed a wooden box beside her and lured the assassins away.

Xia Lian opened her eyes and her eyes became cold. Now she understood her situation and the truth that she was somehow stuck in the historical era.

All this sudden revelation is quite overwhelming. But the basic principle of soldiers which she herself taught to her men many times is that ' A clever soldier should adapt to the circumstances on the battlefield.'

Life is no different from a battlefield. So, she tried to accept the fact that she was in an entire new ancient era without panicking. She should live and she will as she had an additional life to protect. It will be difficult in the start, but she will slowly adapt.

She was an orphan in her previous life. She did not know anything about warmth or love.

But the mother of this body sacrificed herself to protect her children. She deeply respected this choice.

Father! Humph.. He does not deserve to be called a father..

" Lian, take care of yourself and your little brother. Live well. Sorry, mother did not protect you well". These were the last words of this body's mother.

'Since I've occupied this body, I am Xia Lian. You are my mother from now on. I will take good care of Xia Ming.' She promised to the mother in her heart.

" Ming, your sister will protect you with her life." Xia Lian spoke slowly.

The little boy tightened his embrace as if he heard her voice. Xia Lian chuckled and carefully observed her surroundings.

After serving in the military in her past life she is sensitive to the sounds around her and can determine the position of the enemies based on sound.

This is the major skill that is necessary for military officers. One cannot have their eyes on the enemies at all times. There is simply no time to slowly locate them with eyes. In many cases, one has to determine the target and shoot them based on sound alone..

After a few years of training, Xia Lian became proficient in locating enemies only by sound.

Though this body is weak and lacking in strength at the moment, the adrenaline rush in her body increased the sensitivity of her senses.

After determining that no one is present around them, Xia Lian tried to move.

" Hiss.." Xia Lian felt a sharp pain in her body when she tried to move but she finally got up and leaned against the tree while holding the little dumpling in her arms.

You May Also Like

Rebirth: Living in Wilderness with My Superpower

In the apocalypse, Bai Junjun and her arch-enemy wiped each other out fighting over resources. When she opened her eyes again, she unexpectedly found herself in ancient times. The apocalypse's big shot had turned into a refugee fleeing famine. War, famine, plague, bandits... dangers lurked everywhere. Fortunately, her Special Ability had followed her. The Wood-series Ability was incredibly useful in fleeing war and famine. Facing famine, a flick of her fingers made food grow wildly. Facing plague, by casting a Healing Technique, she became immune to all diseases. Facing bandits... as long as... as long as she aligned with the strongest Seven-Person Team, who would dare to attack? There was just one problem—the leader of the Seven-Person Team was her ex-fiancé, who was one foot in the grave. That was a bit awkward. They used each other for their mutual benefit, She provided food, and he ensured her safety. But... the ex-fiancé was a bit of a glutton, wasn't he? Until an accidental intimate encounter, Bai Junjun suddenly saw a vast Space. Wait a minute! The food that she had grown with her Special Ability... was it all in here? This guy actually had a Space! ... They broke off the engagement at the height of prosperity, and they reunited amidst chaos. When both the male and female lead have changed their hearts... Two max-level bosses meet on a narrow path in ancient times, eventually joining forces in a story of internal spiraling competition.

Soy Sauce Pearl · History
Not enough ratings
769 Chs

The Princess and Her Rough-Rider Khan

Petite Princess VS Rough Khan On their wedding day, Yelu Yan told Li Xianyun that apart from affection, he could provide her with endless wealth and honor. After the marriage, he indeed kept his promise, cherishing her in the palm of his hand. Little did he know, the more he cherished her, the deeper she burrowed into his heart, right to the very top. Not long after the political marriage with the Khitans, Li Xianyun gradually noticed earth-shattering changes around her: Initially, the commoners who disliked her began to worship her as a deity... The court officials accusing her of bewitching their lord were now pleading with her to consummate the marriage with the Khan... The most perplexing of all was her husband in name; wasn’t he the one who said he wouldn't give her emotional affection? Why was he always following her around? Little theater scene 1: One day, Yelu Yan cornered Li Xianyun against the wall. “Why are you avoiding this Khan?” “They say you might have taken a liking to your servant.” “Remove ‘might’, isn’t it obvious enough from how this Khan acts?” “But you said you wouldn’t give your servant emotional affection.” Yelu Yan held his forehead; he had indeed said too many foolish things. “The Han people always say that one should start a family and then establish a career; clearly, the two are not in conflict.” Little theater scene 2: The sun had risen high, yet Yelu Yan was still clinging to Li Xianyun. “Get up quickly, I have to leave. There are patients on the street waiting for my consultation, the good fields to the west need irrigation, the homestead plots in the east need measuring, and I have to oversee the silk reeling and dyeing... Uh...” “Your husband is a patient, don’t you care for him?” Li Xianyun looked at the man tough enough to rival ten bulls and was utterly speechless.

Fruit Jelly · History
Not enough ratings
698 Chs

The Whole Village Thrives After Adopting a Lucky Girl

New book launch! "Little Fortunate Treasure of the Farm Family: Breaking Boundaries". All investors are welcome! Brief Description: (Rebirth+ Farming+Magic Cave+Trashing Scum+Becoming Rich) Jiang Sanlang finds a newborn girl on the hill, and raises her as his own daughter. Not long after, his barren wife becomes pregnant with twins. Then, the Jiang family is showered with good fortune, gradually embarking on a road to wealth from being penniless. All the villagers are envious of the Jiang family's good luck and want to partake in the little Fairy Child's fortune. Yingbao waves her tiny hand: Come on everyone, let's go plant some gold and Xue'er. I guarantee you'll have enough food for a year, be rich in two years, and reach the peak of your life in three years. In the end, all the villagers do indeed become wealthy, much to the envy of other villages. Then one day, the family that abandoned the baby girl came to the Jiang family to demand their child back. The entire village is enraged, fists at the ready at the door: Bah! What shameless people dare to steal a child, they should taste some punches first. Yingbao dies, then reincarnates. She never imagined that she was actually a 'throwaway character' from a story, and all her experiences were engineered to drive the plot forward. In this life, Yingbao is determined to steer clear of the female protagonist and supporting characters, avoiding all storyline drama. She aspires to lead her adoptive parents and siblings to a good life, building a prosperous home.

For a long time · History
Not enough ratings
543 Chs

The Tyrant's Pet

Aries Aime Heathcliffe. A princess from the small kingdom of Rikhill was loved by all. With her beauty that was enchantingly demure and a wise mind, she had caught a lot of attention and captured the hearts of many. One of them was the dashing crown prince of the Maganti Empire. Overcome by the desire to have her and his interest in the land of the small kingdom, the crown prince of the said empire would stop at nothing. The knights from the Maganti Empire marched across the masses and seized the four-hundred-year-old kingdom of Rikhill. The kingdom of Rikhill fell into ruin overnight. The crown prince left no members of the royal family alive aside from his war trophy, Aries. After suffering in his hands, Aries found the perfect chance to escape. That was when he took her to the world summit. A gathering of each sovereign from each kingdom and empire for peace talks. There, she met the emperor of Haimirich, Eustass Silvestri Abel Bloodworth. Overwhelm by desperation, Aries begged him to take her in. It was too late when she realized that the man she asked for help was far more cruel, twisted, and downright diabolical than the crown prince for taking her as his… pet! EXCERPT: With a pair of crimson eyes hovering over her, Aries held her breath. When the corner of his lips curled up devilishly, she couldn’t react fast as he swiftly flipped their position. She only realized it when she was saddling him, gazing down at Abel, wide-eyed. “No one is above me in this empire and even out — not even the law, but look at you,” he intoned with a devilish smirk. “Staring down on me… so daunting.” Aries bit her lip, planting her palm on her inked chest. “Your Majesty…” “Do you now understand the power you hold, darling?” Abel carefully wrapped his fingers around her wrist, chuffed by her reaction. “Only you, Aries, may go above me and the only person in this world who can look down on me. No one else.” He raised an arm and ran his fingers through the side of her hair, settling his palm on the back of her head before he pulled her down until her face was a palm length away from him. “You better use this at your own disposal,” he whispered, tilting his head as he lifted it up to claim what’s his. HER. Meet Eustass Silvestri Abel Bloodworth, the sadistic tyrant, who reigned an empire with an iron fist. With his pet, Aries’ increasing presence in his boring, dark life, he was set to kill her. But alas, every time he thought of taking her life, he finds himself changing his mind. The more he kept her by his side, the more it got harder to dispose of her. And the more he yearned for something deeper and darker... it was driving him insane. With a secret he was keeping from her, what would Abel do if Aries found out about the rotting truth behind the empire and the emperor? Would he kill her? Or kiss her? Perhaps cage her? And if she found out that Abel wasn’t just a normal human, would she try to escape? Or would she accept that he wasn’t just a demon incarnate? In a complicated world that tainted them black, was love even possible to bloom between a pet and her master? Watch as these two play the dangerous and insane game of love and lust. Who would be the master and the pet? Who was the prey? Read to find out more. --------- Original Story by: alienfrommars FOLLOW ME ON INSTAGRAM for original character arts: @authoralienfrommars Discord server: https://discord.gg/tbS4rKec3e Disclaimer: Cover not mine. Got it from Pinterest. Credits to the artist.

alienfrommars · History
4.9
919 Chs

Married To The Cruel Crown Prince

Han Sheng Li is the Crown Prince of the Great Han kingdom. Since the age of fourteen, he mostly went to the wars with his father, Han Wenji, the great emperor of the Han Kingdom. He's the most favored child of his father but, is the cruelest and ruthless among all of his seven half brothers. An-Ying Lili, who is known for her kindness and beauty, is the princess of Juyan City. She could not see her family die at the hands of Han Sheng Li so agreed with the marriage alliance which was put forward by the Emperor of Han. ~~~~ “I heard you are the kindest woman in the entire Han Kingdom but, it seems opposite to me. You want me to die!!” The Crown Prince astonishingly said, keeping his icy gaze intact on the woman on his bed. “Cruel people are not worthy of anyone’s kindness,” the Crown princess pronounced sternly. The crown prince chuckled. “Kindest is the one who whimpers in pain. Are you ready for undergoing that pain with this cruel man?” Crown prince asked, slightly tilting his head, and a smirk formed on his lips. Leaning closer to Ying Lili's ear, Sheng Li whispered, "Never expect love from this evil and cruel man. Feed this in your mind- 'You will never warm my bed.' Remember this memorable wedding night, my dear Crown Princess." ~~~~~~ Thanks to "LydiaF" for proofreading the chapters for me. Thanks to My CE for this amazing Title suggestion. The art is commissioned from lia.audelia. The book won WSA NOMINATION 2021, thanks to my lovely readers. Please check out my new story in the same setting- "Gifted Bride of the Sinned Prince." Follow me on Instagram- @rayoflight_pcy

Light_ray · History
4.8
803 Chs
Table of Contents
Volume 0 :World settings
Volume 1 :New life and new world
Volume 2 :A New Journey

ratings

  • Overall Rate
  • Writing Quality
  • Updating Stability
  • Story Development
  • Character Design
  • world background
Reviews
Liked
Newest
hawlol
hawlolLv4

The romance is the only redeeming quality on the story. But even that is spoiled by a single number 12. Being 12 is alright for the MC that is reincarnated but it's wrong for everyone else, specially for the Male Lead that's in love with her already. Taking a 12 year old to a whore house and making her drunk is equally disturbing. I mean... this reads like a pedophile's romance and it just feels wrong. 12 years old is a child, not a teenager, which would alredy be pushing the boundaries. All of this would be corrected by making the MC over 16, so I can't understand the author's choice on this matter, nor can I forgive him. Now for the story, like I said, the romance is good with cute moments, as long as you imagine that the MC is already a grown up with more than 16 years and 12 is a mistype. The characters are well defined and with unique personalities, which is a plus. The action part is dumb, because there's no challenge or reasoning in the battles and being an Army Doctor in the past is reason enough for the MC to be amazing at everything, including archery and spears (Don't think that's what current army doctors are good at). The author also added some form of cultivation to the novel but it's meaningless and not explained. The ML is a big martial artist with 'Qi qong' but the MC fights toe to toe with him without losing or wining and she's half his size without 'Qi Qong' or cultivation. The battles are won by her just because she's 'amazing' and that's it. In other worlds, she's the ultimate 'Mary Sue' that can do anything right without any reason or explanation whatsoever and every problem's solution just comes freely towards her, which makes the story a silly wish fulfillment tale. If you can ignore the age conundrum and like cute romance, you'll like the story, otherwise, keep away from it.

SUPPORT