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aimej
aimejLv156yr
2018-08-03 09:44

Strong female MC ✔ Handsome & a bit innocent ML (who has never fall in love before 😂) ✔ Cute & adorable baby bro ✔ Cheecky brothers ✔ And a hell lot of a** kickin' moves by MC... Pricelessss 😍😍😍😍 Getting in love with this story. One of my accidental discoveries. Give it a try and you won't regret it. Caiyok author nim. You have turn me into a fan of yours. All the best. *Stability update ia just 4 at the mo cos I am a new reader of this story. Will update it once i got an idea of the author's updating mode. 😉

My Beautiful Commander

neha_
4.4
196 Chs

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neha_
neha_Author

Even so it's a wonderful review from you dear.. Thank you so much.. Every review means a lot to me.. I hope you would fall in love with this story.. Have a wonderful reading dear.. *wink*

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yoohime
yoohimeLv6

im new here, deciding to read the novel...

6yr
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aimej
aimejLv15

You won't regret it. It's addicting. 😁

yoohime:im new here, deciding to read the novel...
6yr
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yoohime
yoohimeLv6

yeah i already tried to read last wish system but not really my thing, not that the novel is bad.. just not to my personal liking... i read the first few chaps.. nice opening for the female lead mc

aimej:You won't regret it. It's addicting. 😁
6yr
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EldridSmith
EldridSmithLv5

Incest????

6yr
1
aimej
aimejLv15

Hahahhaha... nope. The "cheecky brothers" refer to her future husband and his younger brother.

EldridSmith:Incest????
6yr
3
riinflorida_
riinflorida_Lv12

Lol. And here I thought you were referring to the MC and her lil bro. No, its not ******.

EldridSmith:Incest????
6yr
2
Kiki06
Kiki06Lv15

Agreed, love this story too!

6yr
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9781125893
9781125893Lv1

Hello

yoohime:im new here, deciding to read the novel...
6yr
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Cheng_Xizhi
Cheng_XizhiLv6

:p

6yr
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yeechen
yeechenLv4

This comment right here is the deciding factor for me to go with the novel.

6yr
1
penumbra
penumbraLv4

Interesting!

6yr
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gonzalesaphrodite8
gonzalesaphrodite8Lv11

Awesome female lead

6yr
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MongYeNi
MongYeNiLv4

Interesting comment... I'll try to read it.

6yr
1
aimej
aimejLv15

You should. Highly recommended. You won't regret it. 😁

MongYeNi:Interesting comment... I'll try to read it.
6yr
salem277
salem277Lv6

If only mc was a man I could enjoy this

6yr
1
jozu143
jozu143Lv13

So true😍 love this very interesting story!!!

6yr
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Deep_eyes
Deep_eyesLv4

After reading your review I gonna try reading it :)

6yr
1
AoMay
AoMayLv5

Should I read or should I not?

6yr
1
aimej
aimejLv15

Yes! 100% yes. 😃

AoMay:Should I read or should I not?
6yr
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Other Reviews
LadyVannadium
LadyVannadiumLv4

My ghaaad! this story is so interesting! pls. release more chapters. I really love the story esp. the main character. The development of the story is good the grammar and the every word use is good Overall. Good! Thumbs up ! The two siblings are very cute and they're so sweet ! hahaha I look forward to this

6yr

Akaira
AkairaLv5

I really really LOVE this novel. The characters are amazing. The FemMC is not dumb. She's very smart and really strong. I always love strong MCs. The Male Lead's Family is so adorable. The FemMC's little brother is also adorable. When they appear in a chapter, it just gives me this fuzzy warm feeling inside. The ML is strong as well so that's always good. I love his brother. I love his sister. I love his father. I love his mother. His mother is awesome. Let me correct that, his family is awesome. All of them are already in the ship eventhough we are still building the ship for our couple here 😂. So that's why they're awesome. If I were you stop reading the reviews here now and start reading this treasure. You will never regret reading it. (Shameless 5* review hoping to motivate the author so I get more chapters to read............)

6yr
Maggiee
MaggieeLv4

Interesting story! Keep it up!!! Thanks for your hard work. I always read your novel and waiting for more chapters !!! Many many thanks 👍😄

6yr
Reading_Otaku
Reading_OtakuLv5

It is good but not as good as the translated novels. The dialogues sounded awkward at times. I am not really one with describing but I can say that this is almost on par with those originals in wattpad. Examples are "Yes, I do(n't)" and "The Empress". This is only my opinion so if you really want to know, it is better to read it yourself.

6yr
ChocoLatte
ChocoLatteLv13

I like how the story goes and all. Just that I hope it's not one of those long story with thousand over chapters. I kind of wish the FL&ML will meet each other again(I'm at ch40)

6yr
Lilyeddy
LilyeddyLv5

Omg!! My favourite character is strong mc btw three chapter is not enough for me, it seems I already addicted 😂 and keep up good work author 😁

6yr
Ginabut
GinabutLv5

Pretty good novel its practically your female cliche heroine novel but its not cringe worthy compared to other stereotype heroine, its decent as of now that is

6yr
GeezAmy
GeezAmyLv5

I have found a gem. I love transmigration novel and strong MC and cute little kid and this one takes the cake. From all the novel I have read so far this is very well written and is an original work. You got to give this novel a read and you will without a doubt be hooked.

6yr
Mocka
MockaLv4

I like this novel so far 😄 Cool MC , hondsome ML And cute little brother 😉 Can't wait for the MC and ML to meet again and to know how the're going to do to develop their feelings for each other 💗💗💗

6yr
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