Review Detail of DetachedDreamer in Dragonborn Saga

I've read this story a few times. its one of the best skyrim fanfics. not saying much since there is only a few decent ones and its definitelynot the best. The Lore delved into is amazing tho, the origin and creativity at designing the beginning character and plot was awesome. however, the author wanted this MC to be unique and used a lazy method to do so. he gave him a cat fetish, thats it. embarrassing, i know. He also gave him angry arrogant women you honestly want to see dead. you know the type that only talk to one man, no friends, and think they are better than everyone. gag. Also, the logic the author forces us to swallow to justify the MCs idiotic actions sometimes is just a mess. The author even reaches so low as to fake a death for some shock factor from the audience, definitelya low point. author was probably going thru real world problems at the time. and also, thats how you know an author is running on fumes. Honestly if this story had an amazing editor or someone to stop the author from some of his mistakes we'd have an unbelievable story on our hands. instead of spending time on nonsense then still following cannon for all the major quests and factions, which honestly shows how wrong the author priorities are when concerning the stories quality. Sad seeing a story not reach its potential but its still worth the read. just get ready to cringe at all the pomp and nonsense that comes with an author like this.