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2021-08-08 13:06

I tried to finish this novel, made it to chapter 270ish. Despite the writing level being that of a drink middle school student at the start, it seemed to have an interesting enough premise, and potential. It failed to live up to any of that. World building was haphazard in those places it did exist. Comparable power levels shifted to fit whatever the author needed to happen at that time. Character personality and background morph with little regard for what's gone before. There is little to no structure, characters show up, randomly interacting with extreme familial intimacy, that have LITERALLY NEVER BEEN MENTIONED BEFORE!! The system is hauled out doing stuff that just needs to be done, but seems to ignore its own rules most of the time. It is also largely ignored except when the writer screws up and needs a hand wave solution. Do not read this book, almost anything is better, and I regret the money I spent unlimited cling chapters because I gate to not finish something I started, regardless of how bad it is. This book however has made me break that trend . I'm only 20 chapters from the end, but I just can't go on. On top of everything else the author needs a serious proof reader as he constantly gender bends his pronouns, mixes up names of who he is referring too, contradicts what he said a paragraph before, and twists idioms to inadvertently reverse their meaning. He also seems to have a fixation with people finding 10-12 year Olds as sexual/romantic/r*pe targets, or implying that someone had kids, at 13, after years of abuse, as if that age was "standard". (23 year old (which he considers mud 20s) with a 10 year old daughter for example). This extends as low as it seemingly being "normal" for the 8 year old twin sister of one character, to have been trading sexual favours to folks for a living.

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DebanganLv13

Well, sounds like the author is 15 yo

Jus7aguyLv15

IF that.

Debangan:Well, sounds like the author is 15 yo
Jus7aguyLv15

Yes I'm aware autocorrect messed up more than a few words in my review. [img=faceslap]

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