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Darkon
DarkonLv46yr
2018-07-08 09:30

World: Creative concept around world building makes it feel original even if it is a fan fiction. Character: The character is my type of character power seeking and not too moral. I feel though that the MC should describe the reasoning behind his actions a little more thoroughly but it’s acceptable for me at its current point as I rather see progression of plot at the moment. Writing Quality: It is quite readable and can’t remember not understanding a certain text even if it isn’t all that strict with it the story more than makes up for any deficiency on that front. Release stability: I like this novel I think it deserves more attention and power stones at least top 50 the issue is the amount of chapters is so low and the wait is aggravating I think the problem with this is that you move on to other novels and don’t donate power stone to the same novel. In conclusion as long as the novel isn’t dropped and the update frequency too low I’m happy with waiting I’ll try to donate at least 1 power stone to this I hope others could do the same if they enjoyed it as much as I did if the story so far.

Vampire in the Harry Potter World

dragonfang1917
3.8
105 Chs

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dragonfang1917
dragonfang1917Author

Thanks I know the update frequency is low right now. However due to it being summer and I will have more time to write

6yr
Kuiboe
KuiboeLv15

Yea i with him

6yr
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Willox
WilloxLv6

Sorry can't bring my self to give anything better. The mc confused me, he goes around wanting to prank voldermort. To going to, hum I need a magic teacher, hey lets pick the most unstable psycho in the harry potter universe as my teacher, yeah nothing can go bad oh and lets reveals all his weakness so that i have no back up plan, when he'll stab me in the back. I still don't understand his plan it seem pretty made up along the way, like yes lets infect harry with vampire blood and leave a note. Dude what the hell, harry plot armor will crush you for this. Sigh, anywho if you like harry potter or vampire fanfiction give this a try the idea is interesting, and other people seem to like it so it not all bad. As for me the mc gave a headache, on his half bakeness, also nothing is explaine no inner monologue to explaine his erratic choices.

6yr

dragonfang1917
dragonfang1917Author

Reveal spoiler

6yr
CH405Kaiser
CH405KaiserLv6

Reveal spoiler

6yr
Rufflesx
RufflesxLv5

Great story, more chapters. More chapters, more fast. ..................... ................... ................ .............. ............. ........... .......... ......... ........ ...... ..... .... ... .. .

6yr
SinfuLeeCerebral
SinfuLeeCerebralLv15

Cant support a novel with racist undertones and hidden agendas. Lots of errors throught the story. Starting every paragraph with the MC name is VERY annoying.. the MC seems like a cardboard cut out.. no depth, no flesh.. good luck though

6yr
1minus2
1minus2Lv5

I appreciate this, only fault IMO would be the Kai wishing he could get back to earth (magic>family4me) anyway it's a cool read and getting progressively more interesting, excited to see what the set up leads to.

6yr
Mahcul
MahculLv4

Reveal spoiler

6yr
DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

MC is beyond stupid and the novel just sucks.. MC goes to save Lily/James potter but just watched Voldemort Kill them and then later he becomes Voldemort’s “partner”(*****) so aka BETA MC and finally he makes Baby Harry Potter into a vampire.... save yourself and don’t read this horrendous piece of ****

5yr
Zonion
ZonionLv14

The novel is amazing and I am sad that it won't be updated anymore. I would like to ask the author to try ending the story or end it on a happy note. To my fellow readers I suggest reading the novel for its ideas and it's plot. The start of the novel is decent, however the author does improve in their story telling and creates heartwarming scenes. Author please update this story

6yr
Heavenfallhellrise
HeavenfallhellriseLv14

Okay I just want to say I love this story it’s a new twist on the Harry Potter universe that wasn’t touched upon so much in the movies and books of the series about the non human beings of the magical world... the only problem I have with this story is the recent lack of releases I need more of this story it’s that good... so please author don’t drop this and please if you can release more often

6yr
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