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SinfuLeeCerebral
SinfuLeeCerebralLv156yr
2018-09-28 17:48

Cant support a novel with racist undertones and hidden agendas. Lots of errors throught the story. Starting every paragraph with the MC name is VERY annoying.. the MC seems like a cardboard cut out.. no depth, no flesh.. good luck though

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dragonfang1917
dragonfang1917Author

Thank you for the honest review as well as checking out the story.

patienceLove
patienceLoveLv5

Racist? lol, you may be the type of person to percieve that kind of matter in everything FYI. I didn't see anything like that. If you review that the story has something like that then you should include a specific example.

SinfuLeeCerebral
SinfuLeeCerebralLv15

🤔🤔 don't owe you anything.. nor was my comment for you 👍🏽 but for the author.. so.. go troll someone else 🤷🏽‍♂️

patienceLove:Racist? lol, you may be the type of person to percieve that kind of matter in everything FYI. I didn't see anything like that. If you review that the story has something like that then you should include a specific example.
patienceLove
patienceLoveLv5

I see, mind my own business and don't be upset when someone comes at a peice of work I appreciate with a vague complaint.

SinfuLeeCerebral:🤔🤔 don't owe you anything.. nor was my comment for you 👍🏽 but for the author.. so.. go troll someone else 🤷🏽‍♂️
SinfuLeeCerebral
SinfuLeeCerebralLv15

Exactly 😀 I'm glad you're starting to understand that regardless of your stance, the opinion of others has nothing to do with you. 👍🏽

patienceLove:I see, mind my own business and don't be upset when someone comes at a peice of work I appreciate with a vague complaint.
patienceLove
patienceLoveLv5

It does though, you being a dummy interrupts my good time but it doesn't matter because I doubt you can take any critism based on your nigger speak.

SinfuLeeCerebral:Exactly 😀 I'm glad you're starting to understand that regardless of your stance, the opinion of others has nothing to do with you. 👍🏽
SinfuLeeCerebral
SinfuLeeCerebralLv15

Oh you were upset and throwing a fit because your a racist as well 🤔 makes sense.. birds of a feather flock together 😂 you probably get your rocks off reading work with strong racist undertones.. ✊🏽🍆💦 it probably helps stroke your perversions lmao you're nothing but a clown 🤡

patienceLove:It does though, you being a dummy interrupts my good time but it doesn't matter because I doubt you can take any critism based on your nigger speak.
patienceLove
patienceLoveLv5

You want people to be racist, so you can complain and feel better about yourself. I was just giving you what you wanted my friend.

SinfuLeeCerebral:Oh you were upset and throwing a fit because your a racist as well 🤔 makes sense.. birds of a feather flock together 😂 you probably get your rocks off reading work with strong racist undertones.. ✊🏽🍆💦 it probably helps stroke your perversions lmao you're nothing but a clown 🤡
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