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Jorgovan_77
Jorgovan_77Lv32mthJorgovan_77

This book, started great, refreshing plot, and MC is not a fighter he desings mechs, and author was on FIRE, but just for his 2 first original desings, they were detailed just enough so your imagination could set of fireworks in your head, and 5000 chapters in, I can remember them in my mind lividly. But then somebody, someone or something killed the artist. None of his mechs bore any detail, he started typing filler chapters( What could be said in three sentences you drag on for several hunder words.) The romance plot took noosedive, author probably had broken up with someone, beacuse his wife just had angry words for him, no love, no kind gestures, just fight, maybe thats how his parents were who knows. He planned his children lifes for them not giving them much choice. Through whole story he ridicules any kind of faith, but then he becomes God himself. Generally is is uniqe storry, much better then the rest out there, he has good plot twists, but this author appeard happy to me when he started the story, and then he just spiraled out. This could have been masterpiece, easy ranked number one, sad to see it go this way. Best of luck in life author san

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Wasavi
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couldnt say it better,