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Wasavi16dPostedI am logging in just to review this novel, Ill be short and concise. This is a great novel that is held back by both the author's ability and inclinations. read up till chapter 3075 1) World building: top tier it is clear that the author put a lot of thought into it as everything is well thought out. Very few novels come to mind that matches the level of detail this has. 2) Action: Again top tier, the descriptions are decent and the creativity of the author is quite good. 3)Story: Sci fy opera epic. This is lord of the rings level story building if you're reading this. 4)Character: the author biggest fault lies here. A couple of things are clear, 1 the author rarely talks with women or has had a relationship with women. 2 the author has few to no friends. 3 the author has toxic relationships as his close friends. 4 the author has massive self esteem issues Honestly the interactions are just bad if we assume this novel is a realistic attempt and is therefore no over fantasizing relationships etc. Then to be blunt its masculinsing women into men as well as having a very light veil of misandry throught the entire novel. If we do the opposite and its only done so for the laughs, then it fails miserably and is done at the expense of the readers patience. Even if we ignore the gender issues the author seems to be conflicted about, every relationship is more of a trade rather than a friendship, to which while in real life in order to have a relationship a trade needs to exist. The over enfasis of the trade shows a lack of social skills by the author. In conclusion, this novel is an amazong novel that is held back by the self esteem issues and struggled the author seems to have with his real life relstionships. If your a guy with a sense of self respect this novel will make you uncomfortable so I would not recomend it. If you are a women as long as your okay with no real feminine influence in this novel you should be fine if not more than welcomed into it.
- Wasavi2yrCommented
Bro you cant just drop the daddy incantation. To dangerouse
"More… more! Touch me more, daddy!" - Wasavi2yrCommented
Watch out guys, this is what happens if you wash your sword 2 much
I lean on the bed and try to get up, but all of a sudden I feel my hand sinking into the material of the bed. I hear the noise of wood breaking and look in the direction of my hand; I see that my hand has gone through the mattress and broke the wood that supports my bed... - Wasavi2yrReplied to Silco69
R/wooooosh but i guess you could also be a joke so r/woosh to myself
[A/N: Before you start reading, please understand that this is a fiction, anything resembling the real world is a mere coincidence, I have no intention of offending any kind of group, this is just a fiction!] - Wasavi2yrReplied to Blanket
Not really but feel free to be wrong - stayad
To sum it up in one sentence: Every major city was annihilated in a single day. Moscow, Tokyo, Paris, Washington, London; the names of every capital city one could think of had been erased from the face of the Earth. No explanation was given. No adventurous war reporter crossed the military cordon that cut off civilian access to these areas. - Wasavi2yrReplied to Moyonopoly
bro how is that even a word
The Oracle Overseer was a life form that defied common sense. Far from being a terrifying monster like the Oracle Knights guarding the stage, it was a rachitic creature that confronted them. - Wasavi2yrCommented
just realised dudes french is this why he always gives up?
"Mmm, I see. That's why you have such a British accent. After the Earth Government establishment, most French learned how to speak English, using French less and less, but our accent is still quite easy to distinguish." - Wasavi2yrCommented
just graduated a few weeks ago, belive me i have no fucking clue what i am doing rn
"…" Jake sighed. "You do realize it is what my bachelor is all about, right?" - Wasavi2yrReplied to Blanket
wait ti does it holds 3% of the entire population of india.
To sum it up in one sentence: Every major city was annihilated in a single day. Moscow, Tokyo, Paris, Washington, London; the names of every capital city one could think of had been erased from the face of the Earth. No explanation was given. No adventurous war reporter crossed the military cordon that cut off civilian access to these areas. - Wasavi2yrReplied to
its that indias capital dosent even have 1% of its entire population
To sum it up in one sentence: Every major city was annihilated in a single day. Moscow, Tokyo, Paris, Washington, London; the names of every capital city one could think of had been erased from the face of the Earth. No explanation was given. No adventurous war reporter crossed the military cordon that cut off civilian access to these areas. - Wasavi2yrReplied to Blanket
exactly dont you get it?
To sum it up in one sentence: Every major city was annihilated in a single day. Moscow, Tokyo, Paris, Washington, London; the names of every capital city one could think of had been erased from the face of the Earth. No explanation was given. No adventurous war reporter crossed the military cordon that cut off civilian access to these areas. - Wasavi2yrReplied to AncientEclipse
bro taking shit personally lmao, if you got beat by daddy just say so
When the child was exceptional, in contrast to the previous example, parents would become strict. On the one hand, they would not want their child to waste his or her talent. On the other hand, they would often unconsciously transfer their own failed dreams to them. - Wasavi2yrReplied to Wasavi
Okay my fears were wrong.
As first impressions went, Ves was very impressed with his date. Although he couldn't say whether the new arrival fit his type, she was certainly an impressive woman on her own. So much so that Ves even doubted whether he was worthy of her attention! - Wasavi2yrCommented
Bro srsly? God i just hope he dosent become a complete dufus. If theres someone who I look down on the most, is either guys or girls that let there partners walk all over them.
As first impressions went, Ves was very impressed with his date. Although he couldn't say whether the new arrival fit his type, she was certainly an impressive woman on her own. So much so that Ves even doubted whether he was worthy of her attention! - Wasavi2yrCommented
4chaner detected
"The end of humanity has come. Haha, everyone will die!" - Wasavi2yrCommentedCh 127 A showdown of the shvontz
- Wasavi2yrCommentedCh 239 Dancing Along The Edge
- Wasavi2yrCommented
just passing by to drop a comment since the author inst aware. Therese a thing called the corporate vale, and him acting as if the company is him and he is the company actually destroys it. Which makes him liable for any damages or dept it might generate. Its very important to keep the corporate vale and to keep wallets separated when your making a llc.
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