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Jorgovan_77

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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_772mth
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    It seemed that at some point during the fight, the tall girl's makeshift seaweed top came apart, leaving her naked above the waist. She was covering her chest with one arm. Behind the arm, squished, the supple fullness of her…
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    He suddenly regretted that he was not an artist. The picture just begged to be made into a painting.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    "Actually, I would prefer to see you without a robe…"
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    "Actually, I would prefer to see you without a robe…"
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_772mth
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    "Actually, I would prefer to see you without a robe…"
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    "Of course not. I'm not an idiot!"
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    "I've seen plenty... but no one as beautiful as you."
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    Flaw Description: [You cannot lie.]
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_772mth
    Replied to Kaitelin

    it is incredible how many people ask this question now, and then it becomes relevant much later in the story

    [You have defeated an awakened human: Auro of the Nine.]
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_772mth
    Replied to Revered_Venerable

    several dozen means many: probably more then 36, however in the novel all the saints that appear you can count them on your finger

    If a Master conquers the Third Nightmare, they become a Saint. Their Soul Core evolves to the Transcended Rank and they gain a Transformation Aspect Ability. There are only several dozen Saints in all of humanity.
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_773mth
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    But how can he be sure that Michael is up to task? This will be his biggest battle by now, many thing can go wrong, I expected more sage advices on this topic for him, to me this sounds like he leaves it all to the power of friendship XD

    Kraft Viton had a bunch of questions but he didn't inquire more. He was sure that Michael would come to him and tell him about his problems when he was ready. Michael knew that he could always come to him and ask for help.
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_773mth
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    This book, started great, refreshing plot, and MC is not a fighter he desings mechs, and author was on FIRE, but just for his 2 first original desings, they were detailed just enough so your imagination could set of fireworks in your head, and 5000 chapters in, I can remember them in my mind lividly. But then somebody, someone or something killed the artist. None of his mechs bore any detail, he started typing filler chapters( What could be said in three sentences you drag on for several hunder words.) The romance plot took noosedive, author probably had broken up with someone, beacuse his wife just had angry words for him, no love, no kind gestures, just fight, maybe thats how his parents were who knows. He planned his children lifes for them not giving them much choice. Through whole story he ridicules any kind of faith, but then he becomes God himself. Generally is is uniqe storry, much better then the rest out there, he has good plot twists, but this author appeard happy to me when he started the story, and then he just spiraled out. This could have been masterpiece, easy ranked number one, sad to see it go this way. Best of luck in life author san

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    The Mech Touch
    Sci-fi · Exlor
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_773mth
    Replied to Jorgovan_77

    Red flags*

    Ch 542 Surprise
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    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Jorgovan_77
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    I like this building part, you earn money, you grow, seems wholesome, and it is real reason why I stuck to this novel, I get people like fighting, but I personal dont like this whole curse you gotta fight story, kind off drives story in one direction, and then it is far more easier to see through the plot, and charachter has less free will, and question for author (i dont comment much might as well throw it all out). Why dosent Michael stays with warlocks and berserkers. I mean in human teritory he has Dark heaven and High nobels going after him in shadows, while with beserkers he is repsected as hero, and since they are the race that dislikes trickery very much, he could buy their protection easy. I mean on one side is ride flags other green flags, dosent seem like a hard thing to decide?

    Ch 542 Surprise
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_777mth
    Replied to Kouris

    True but that is mixing Apple and pier, they are both fruits that grow on tree, but they are diffrent, same here, he ask for longsword, the longsword dont have square tips

    "Give me a thin longsword, please. Double-edge, straight blade, and pointed tip," Michael requested instantly.
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_777mth
    Commented

    it seems like normal ranking system from F TO S buuut, it is incredible hard to advance, so it acctualy very uniqe, props to author san for making every aspects of this story uniqe and not copied

    ❖ Soul Rank
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    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_777mth
    Commented

    DO NOT SKIP THIS CHAPTER

    The Nightmare Spell
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_777mth
    Commented

    GO BACK UP READ THE SETTING OF THE WORLD

    Nightmare Begins
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    Shadow Slave
    Fantasy · Guiltythree
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_777mth
    Commented

    this unpacking stuff, where he gets New Summons and improves, it is so addictive

    Ch 297 Expansion II
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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  • Jorgovan_77
    Jorgovan_777mth
    Replied to Sorenmageofmareth

    square tip,dude so geometrics, where have you seen the square at the tip of the longsword, did you mix it up with triangle?

    "Give me a thin longsword, please. Double-edge, straight blade, and pointed tip," Michael requested instantly.
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    Supreme Lord: I can extract everything!
    Fantasy · HideousGrain
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