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DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv66yr
2018-09-01 06:03

As far as i read the story is not bad but there are lot of plot holes like killing monsters for 5 years only to lvl up from lvl 8 to lvl 18 man wtf did this guy do and the part where he killd his first human vut when he saved that princess we know that he kills lot of them.. and so on the stats are all equal well i know that his class is magical knight but way does he still get +2 to all stats he should get a bonus like +5 to all stats or does he need a bloodline for that.. anyway ty for writing this novel hope we can see more and sorry for my bad english

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DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

What i wanted to say about the stats is if one class is a mage but he is strong as a knight that makes no sense so pls fix that if one is a mage ever lvl up he can get +2 to all stats but pls give them bonus to intelligents and wisdom and if one is a knight thwn give him strength and vitality so that it makes sense i dont get way mc gets plus 2 evwry lvl up

MiLfL0VeR
MiLfL0VeRLv12

Welp gona stay away from this novel then

DarkKnight32
DarkKnight32Lv6

Bro i checked out the story its completely different when i read it 4 months ago you should try it out maybe the author fixed a lot of things it is a 200 ch story

MiLfL0VeR:Welp gona stay away from this novel then
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The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress. The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah. If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't. And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books. Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out. This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb. Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.

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