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DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv146yr
2018-04-14 20:58

This story has a great start so far the only thing that takes you out of the story is the gender swapping sometimes the mc is male others female also a enchantress is normally associated with women and a enchanter for males please fix that as it makes no sense if that character was a male

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Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13

So is the mc male or female I still haven’t read the novel

DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv14

He is male about 6 ft plain looks dosent stand out in crowd not described looks much

Lonely_citizen:So is the mc male or female I still haven’t read the novel
Lonely_citizen
Lonely_citizenLv13

Thx

DragonGodSmith3000:He is male about 6 ft plain looks dosent stand out in crowd not described looks much
Jesse_Huazo_0595
Jesse_Huazo_0595Lv14

Yup

Lebone_Sekhukhune
Lebone_SekhukhuneLv3

i don't care how normal you look you're not blending in at 6ft

DragonGodSmith3000:He is male about 6 ft plain looks dosent stand out in crowd not described looks much
DragonGodSmith3000
DragonGodSmith3000Lv14

Haha sure buddy

Lebone_Sekhukhune:i don't care how normal you look you're not blending in at 6ft
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NightingNox
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ChubsC
ChubsCLv11

The story is OKAY, however, every once in a while I start thinking "this is garbage". There was a chapter that talked about how you won't be able to kill a monster if you hit the leg when it's HP is at 1. There was a whole tangent about how this was real life and whatnot...I digress. The main thing that caught me off guard is that he has been in the first woods he landed in for five plus years. You would think he would have figured that out by now. Another aspect is when he gets his class. He was suppose to have been battered by the elements, but reading that chapter I felt the author might have well just given him the class. The first element was fire, it was meant to burn his soul and body and that somewhat portrayed. He just clenched his teeth and withstood it. Thing is, how could he. He was a regular person, before the reincarnation, spent five plus years in the woods to level (by the way only getting to about 15, which is bull...five year and only 15 when the first monster he kills gets him like 9 levels), then you are expected to feel like he's a tough dude. Didn't get that. I mean fire, water, wind, earth, metal, ect. was attacking his soul and body, and you expect me to believe he just clenched his teeth and withstood it from some inner strength? Nah. If you had made it a point in those five year he was in the woods to toughen the MC mentally and physically...then yeah, I'll buy it...but you didn't. And the skills that the wolf passed to him, the heal, purify and the others, I can get how that can happen. I mean the wolf is supposedly bad ass. I can get behind that. Thing is we are never really explained to of how skills get around, how they are passed, conditions, ect. It just seems like anyone can pass skills around like that if they have a technique, which I'm guessing is a no. So, I would have like to have seen more in the shape of an explanation of what skills are, how do you get them, can you get a skill outside you class, can you work towards a skill or do they just use skills books. Also, I get the felling that there is no order...or rather no reason as to why he has done a lot of the things he's done and if there were it's not really well written out. This novel tries to make the MC mysterious, but in the end it fails..with the whole "No Name" alias he uses in the brothel, I get that his status screen doesn't have a name for him, but that alias is just dumb. Overall, this story tires, but fails in my opinion.

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