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Knight_NoctisLv42mth
2024-09-04 01:41

From story to plot , everything is quite well written . But everything good with the story gets pretty much forgotten with the mc. He's not even a generic one. He's just a robot with no dreams or ambitions. His interactions are incredibly bland. And the system just slaves him around . That's another negative point of the story.

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Ron_Dera
Ron_DeraLv1

من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي

Leylindd
LeylinddLv14

yes

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
Incognito_San
Incognito_SanLv3

nice

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
viloh
vilohLv6

alright, for anyone curious about what was said in arabic, here's a rough translation not word for word since i'm on my phone and have to read a couple of lines and remember them (since the keyboard takes half of the screen and the comment box takes the other half) as i translate in my mind it's clear that the MC Isn't a social person and that he doesn't hate being alone he also enjoys traveling between diffrent islands and trying out a variety of foods and drinks the author wants him to be like haw-eyes and in the future we will see his effects on characters like sanji kuina and zoro

Kratossonofzeuz
KratossonofzeuzLv13

I read it i think this is google translated weird why did he write it in arabic

Ron_Dera:من الواضح ان البطل ليس شخص اجتماعيا و هو لا يكره كونها وحيدا كما انه يستمتع بالترحال عبر الجزر المختلفة و تجربة انواع مختلفة من الطعام و الكحول المؤلف يريده ان يكون مشابها العين الصقر و في المستقبل سوف نرى تأثيره على شخصيات مثل زورو و كوينا و سانجي
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