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Okoski

Okoski

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2023-08-04 UnidoGlobal
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
    Respondeu a RubyRebels

    Thanks for the comment, I'll do just that, but for the reason she is at magic school, read the auxiliary chapter, I edited it yesterday.

    Ch 1 Lily in Magic School
    The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    This chapter is really short

    Ch 17 One truth unveiled
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    ??

    Este número foi suprimido.
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    little error

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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    little error

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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    That's great. Why do you even care about him.

    "Whatever, I don't care if he doesn't like the color of my hair. It's not like him liking my hair will do me any good"she thought as she walked downstairs though she still had a sad look.
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    Is white not a color?

    "How could I have thought someone could accept me and my colorless hair."Regina thought as Debbie helped her put on the wig. When she looked at herself in the mirror, she almost thought she had black hairs. Debbie's trick was so good, anyone who hadn't met her before would've believed she had black hair. She had to admit that she liked it.
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
    Respondeu a RubyRebels

    Thanks for the comment, which you good luck with your book too. But if I may ask, how was your first chapter experience, was it only the writing that caught your attention? I'll love to know how readers interact with my book.

    Ch 1 Lily in Magic School
    The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
    Respondeu a FANSS

    Thanks for the correction 👍

    Este número foi suprimido.
    The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
    Respondeu a FANSS

    okay[img=recommend]

    _From this day! I will be called hero, majestic, almighty, just like Lord Iwatani in rising of the shield hero, I will be a merchant hero, and once I will have enough of money, I'll go back to my world._
    The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
    Respondeu a FANSS

    Thanks for the correction 😊 but I didn't say Naufumi is money minded, read well.Thanks for your comments and support ❤️

    _From this day! I will be called hero, majestic, almighty, just like Lord Iwatani in rising of the shield hero, I will be a merchant hero, and once I will have enough of money, I'll go back to my world._
    The Enchanteds. I'm the protector of the underworld!! Eternity♪┌|∵|┘♪
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    [img=recommend][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]

    _A beautiful couple of liers_
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    [img=faceslap]

    She smiled (a very ugly one at that).
    The Kpop Addict: Kim Jae Ra
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
    Respondeu a ArtoriaPendragon_

    that's kinda harsh, but that's true.

    IN Harry Potter With a System
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    liar

    "We've known each other for some time now. I'd never loved any girl, she was the first. I found out she loved me too. So we got married."
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    what a disrespectful child, at least I fell for his beautiful face, and nice character, waiting to see his mom.[img=Your move]

    2 days ago, he had managed to get her spies(yeah, she has spies to check on her son) find out about his marriage and it's exact date. All he had to do was go to one of his mother's clubs and host a party there saying it's to celebrate his marriage then wait for the information to get to his mother.
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    she accepted Lexus as her master too quickly

    Ch 11 Escape plan number 4.
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    I find the story really interesting, at least I did not waste my time making the book cover, keep up, it's really wonderful,words are not enough to explain how interesting and thrilling this novel is.please author, don't contract it yet, I'll like to read it for free.[img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move][img=Your move]I'm giving you a 4.8 because you don't update everyday, without that, it's a five star direct.

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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    I'm sure this novel will be really popular one day

    "He loves me, he'll do anything for me"she furrowed her brows."If he loves me then he'll do anything for me!" she said with a degree of excitement that could be compared to Archimedes' as he ran down the streets naked, screaming 'Eureka'.
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  • Okoski
    Okoski10mth
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    waiting for your next plan[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

    "He loves me, he'll do anything for me"she furrowed her brows."If he loves me then he'll do anything for me!" she said with a degree of excitement that could be compared to Archimedes' as he ran down the streets naked, screaming 'Eureka'.
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