Naruto: Reborn with Kaguya Powers

I'm just writing for fun. I might have many mistakes, either be like Lord 3rd and ignore them or be like the 7th and point it out... please don't choose to be lord 2nd.

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The premise is pretty cool, dude is extremely overpowered right from the start but it’s alright since it got nerfed a tiny bit. Personally I just don’t like mc’s that have op powers but didn’t need to work for it at all. What I do like tho is that he is in kumo since that isn’t seen in a lot of fics The grammar and writing is average at best. I think the author forgot how to write the word ‘The’ in every sentence and the flow of the writing just doesn’t feel right. It’s like it was written in a rush and not looked over again after finishing. From the little bit I read the mc is an adult but behaves like a child.. may be because he is in a child’s body but whatever. This is basically just a generic wish fulfillment story

dude, shadow clones are a technique of Konoha and the development of Tobirama, this is a forbidden jutsu, how can he use it, and especially since he is 3 years old, if he had done another training, the story would have gone in a different direction, but right now it reads as if it was written by a 10 year old boy who just watched Naruto and he too developed imaginationhe has so many abilities just his chakra and his body is already blowing the roof, even if he has not awakened all his abilities, at such an age and with such a volume of chakra and abilities, including the byakugan, you can come up with something more interesting than shadow clones, this is already such an outdated topic!)

good so far from what I read, keep it up i wish to see how this story goes.

very nice fic would love to know more about this fic