GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM

Ok. Unsightly, you have ONE job. Write a banger review without reading the story. 3.. 2.. 1.. "Hello guys, TO-DAY we are going to be reviewing 'Game Developer System' by NunuXD! I have only read very, very, little of the book but I can tell it is great by the awsome storyline! The characters are SUUUUPER great! And, also, the system is very interesting! I advise you guys to check it out and leave a like. Unsightly, out"

well it was a fun read while it was unlocked guess i have to drop the story and use daily stone elsewhere :P

how is that legal he is using other company's IP putting the story be-hide a paywall would be illegal as it would breach copy right infringement as he would be make money off of some else's work or am i wrong??? i do not think patreon counts as they would be paying to support the fanfic writer a unique world with fair use content but i do not know the full legal mumbo jumbo????? can someone clarify

The story is great and I've been following it for a while but now all of a sudden the chapters are locked for some reason. why?

To put a pay wall on a story like this where all of the games and other things are stolen.. [img=faceslap]

he drops every novel just look at his other books - didn’ start this one because i knew max 50 chapter before disappear. don’t fall for his tricks next time he comes up with a new idea

It was fun at first but he put it behind a paywall when the ideas weren’t his.

The thing I don agree with is the pay wall becsuse the world may be somewhat concept but the games his charac make aren’t. Therefore I believe for there to be an actual paywall then it should be complety orginal, games and all.

Too many plot holes, the authors skipped too much to rush into the paywall. Many questionable places that completely ruined the fun were not addressed. The design of Developer and Player were about the Developers make games to train the Players, however, the Developers could completely stomp players for some reasons. The MC also made questionable choices out of nowhere, instead of digging around for more information, he decided to fight monsters because why not? This novel is much worse than MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM in all aspects.

Writing Quality :- 4 Star Updating Stability :- 4 Star (One less cause it's look like author forgot he was writing one more series before this one) Story Development :- 2 Star (I'm finding many things to be "Illogical" In this story. It's human nature to find fun in boring stuff, so to saying that no one come up with an idea too male games more fun doesn't sit well with me. There is also not much info about MC system or how MC has sach a good memory that he remember every sentence said by NPC. Other things would be what is actual difference between a Developer and a Player, is this only about having more mana? Aren't developers just too overpowered in your story? What is Ratio of Developer and Player? So many things are unanswered, and and fills like Author started writing story about only making basic framework instead of in depth thinking) Character Design :- 2 Star ( Characters fills not real and more 2D to me, they are like people programmed to only say good things and prise everything about Main Character) World Background :- 2 Star (Can't say much about it cause MC has yet to travel different city's but it is still 2 star for me) Overall :- Good novel for passing free time, will reading this novel you have to accept many things cause author say so. But i honestly don't see myself getting into this novel.

Novel dropper and putting a paywall when you use others works

another dropped novel by this author hahaha I'm so glad that there is people who always pirated his work because it's just means that he will drop it again and again until the time comes where he will learn that no one is reading his rip off novel anymore

The classic novel dropper cash grabber your brother is definitely better

As the first person to write a review, im looking forward to this new novel made by nunu

This is fantastic, I would argue that it is your most detailed work yet, Even more than I became a god which I enjoyed even more than game maker, hope you continue this

Not worth wasting your time when no new chapters are coming out and now you have to pay for what should be free ripping readers off.

The story started off good but now it's going down the drain... The main character insists on giving his games away for free for no reason other than plot! Like why is he making his games free? The only reason he is doing so is to please others for no reason... It's not like the people who play the games can't afford it! He already made a point that F-rank players make at least $100 per mission and higher ranks make even more. If the game is drastically improving their skills and pushing them to E-rank (which earn $1000 per mission) and higher, then what is spending $20 or even $50 on the game? It is absolutely nothing to them! Even most ordinary people could afford it, but since the author is desperate to keep the MC poor, he will apparently keep his games free... Like an idi0t! If he sold it for $50, he would have $50,000 with just 1000 downloads. With the near 10,000 downloads he had rn (at chapter 25), he would have $500,000!!! Even if he sold the game for $10, he would have around $100,000! And that is only for ONE SMALL TOWN which he is currently in! But noooo, he wants to give his games away for free despite using the pseudonym EA for his games! And because he is so poor, he is happy for receiving a small amount of money for the rights to make Resident Evil into a move/TV show! Those $40,000 are nothing compared to the millions he could make if he made and sold the movie himself!! He literally made a trailer for the game in like a single day! What is stopping him from creating his own movies or TV series and marketing them himself on his account?!?!? Again, this is all due to the author purposely trying to make him poor so he can't afford any luxuries at all and have to rely on others to get him things that he would have been able to afford himself!!

The concept is interesting for someone who is reading this type of genre for the first time, but for more experienced readers it is very tiring as it is not at all original. It's all very similar to several novels of this genre that I read on mtl

A game developer is a pretty interesting background for the novel. Characters overall are developed okay but sometimes its feels like ChatGPT has been writing as its lacks soul especially in dialogue between characters. The worst thing is the update speed, Nunu has went on haitus or dropped several novels. Besides that its incredibly difficult for him to write at least 1 chapter a day. I can understand why but its gonna kill the popularity of any novel he writes.

At the moment I write this review there aren't a lot of chapters, only six, but as usual for Nunu's story, it has a lot of potentials and I want to read what comes next. Besides that, I absolutely love the worldbuilding of this story, but there isn't enough chapter yet to make an objective review so will stop here and come back later.