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Kuze_Hotarubi
Kuze_HotarubiLv11yr
2023-05-19 14:49

Too many plot holes, the authors skipped too much to rush into the paywall. Many questionable places that completely ruined the fun were not addressed. The design of Developer and Player were about the Developers make games to train the Players, however, the Developers could completely stomp players for some reasons. The MC also made questionable choices out of nowhere, instead of digging around for more information, he decided to fight monsters because why not? This novel is much worse than MARVEL: GAME MAKER SYSTEM in all aspects.

GAME DEVELOPER SYSTEM

NunuXD
4.3
46 Chs

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

regarding dev and player. i think the author already explain it, it's like Chinese cultivation, there are Genius (Heaven Root), Talented(Earth Root), Normies(trash). basically it's all about luck and talent. kinda agree with the monster hunting part. wish he just stayed and developing more game.

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Kuze_Hotarubi
Kuze_HotarubiLv1

You forgot one thing, the Players NEED the Developers, but not otherwise. If Developers has a whole dimension higher amount of mana, can create skills at will and do whatever they want, then Players are just mana slaves. The roles are there for distinction and to drive the story, if Developers could fight better than Players, then why bother training Players? This setting should make the Developer unable to fight, or is severely limited. Think about it, he barely crossed E-rank and he already have enough "confident" to fight mid-peak E-rank monsters after sleeping around the house for a month. In Chapter 13, the author wrote that the Developers could use Mana to learn skills and what is lacking at the moment is their imagination. I can't see why the Principal or the Mayor wouldn't abuse this and create a bunch of C-class skills. While something like the knowledge to upgrade gun required the Developers to know it beforehand, throwing a fireball shouldn't be so hard to imagine. You see the point here? The Developers does not "have to" train the Players. They just need to create some powers and force the Players to play it to get Mana and then convert the skills to real-life for themselves. It can be as bland as a sitting down on a chair and watch a NPC using a summoning spell to summon a dragon on loop.

MorningWood_Dao:regarding dev and player. i think the author already explain it, it's like Chinese cultivation, there are Genius (Heaven Root), Talented(Earth Root), Normies(trash). basically it's all about luck and talent. kinda agree with the monster hunting part. wish he just stayed and developing more game.
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Kuze_Hotarubi
Kuze_HotarubiLv1

In addition, only the MC want to grow up fast. For people like the Principal and Mayor, they absolutely can wait a year or five doing nothing to learn a skill.

MorningWood_Dao:regarding dev and player. i think the author already explain it, it's like Chinese cultivation, there are Genius (Heaven Root), Talented(Earth Root), Normies(trash). basically it's all about luck and talent. kinda agree with the monster hunting part. wish he just stayed and developing more game.
1yr
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Unsightly
UnsightlyLv1

Ok. Unsightly, you have ONE job. Write a banger review without reading the story. 3.. 2.. 1.. "Hello guys, TO-DAY we are going to be reviewing 'Game Developer System' by NunuXD! I have only read very, very, little of the book but I can tell it is great by the awsome storyline! The characters are SUUUUPER great! And, also, the system is very interesting! I advise you guys to check it out and leave a like. Unsightly, out"

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ntw_ff
ntw_ffLv11

well it was a fun read while it was unlocked guess i have to drop the story and use daily stone elsewhere :P

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Khristian_cook
Khristian_cookLv4

how is that legal he is using other company's IP putting the story be-hide a paywall would be illegal as it would breach copy right infringement as he would be make money off of some else's work or am i wrong??? i do not think patreon counts as they would be paying to support the fanfic writer a unique world with fair use content but i do not know the full legal mumbo jumbo????? can someone clarify

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Bojackland
BojacklandLv12

The story is great and I've been following it for a while but now all of a sudden the chapters are locked for some reason. why?

1yr
HereForGoodRead
HereForGoodReadLv4

To put a pay wall on a story like this where all of the games and other things are stolen.. [img=faceslap]

1yr
Alex_Kim_5830
Alex_Kim_5830Lv13

he drops every novel just look at his other books - didn’ start this one because i knew max 50 chapter before disappear. don’t fall for his tricks next time he comes up with a new idea

1yr
Over_Lord_9904
Over_Lord_9904Lv5

It was fun at first but he put it behind a paywall when the ideas weren’t his.

1yr
Deadline_423
Deadline_423Lv12

The thing I don agree with is the pay wall becsuse the world may be somewhat concept but the games his charac make aren’t. Therefore I believe for there to be an actual paywall then it should be complety orginal, games and all.

1yr
Aman_Gupta_1277
Aman_Gupta_1277Lv1

Writing Quality :- 4 Star Updating Stability :- 4 Star (One less cause it's look like author forgot he was writing one more series before this one) Story Development :- 2 Star (I'm finding many things to be "Illogical" In this story. It's human nature to find fun in boring stuff, so to saying that no one come up with an idea too male games more fun doesn't sit well with me. There is also not much info about MC system or how MC has sach a good memory that he remember every sentence said by NPC. Other things would be what is actual difference between a Developer and a Player, is this only about having more mana? Aren't developers just too overpowered in your story? What is Ratio of Developer and Player? So many things are unanswered, and and fills like Author started writing story about only making basic framework instead of in depth thinking) Character Design :- 2 Star ( Characters fills not real and more 2D to me, they are like people programmed to only say good things and prise everything about Main Character) World Background :- 2 Star (Can't say much about it cause MC has yet to travel different city's but it is still 2 star for me) Overall :- Good novel for passing free time, will reading this novel you have to accept many things cause author say so. But i honestly don't see myself getting into this novel.

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