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Aman_Gupta_1277
Aman_Gupta_1277Lv11yr
2023-05-16 17:07

Writing Quality :- 4 Star Updating Stability :- 4 Star (One less cause it's look like author forgot he was writing one more series before this one) Story Development :- 2 Star (I'm finding many things to be "Illogical" In this story. It's human nature to find fun in boring stuff, so to saying that no one come up with an idea too male games more fun doesn't sit well with me. There is also not much info about MC system or how MC has sach a good memory that he remember every sentence said by NPC. Other things would be what is actual difference between a Developer and a Player, is this only about having more mana? Aren't developers just too overpowered in your story? What is Ratio of Developer and Player? So many things are unanswered, and and fills like Author started writing story about only making basic framework instead of in depth thinking) Character Design :- 2 Star ( Characters fills not real and more 2D to me, they are like people programmed to only say good things and prise everything about Main Character) World Background :- 2 Star (Can't say much about it cause MC has yet to travel different city's but it is still 2 star for me) Overall :- Good novel for passing free time, will reading this novel you have to accept many things cause author say so. But i honestly don't see myself getting into this novel.

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MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

kinda agree with this. as for Developer vs Player. i think the author explain it like: it's all talent. that's it. just like Chinese cultivation (heaven root, earth root, human root) as for ratio, about 1 dev : 1000 player : 100000 normies (assumption)

Aman_Gupta_1277
Aman_Gupta_1277Lv1

I was thinking, what only developers can make game? More Mana? So in later stage don't players have enough Mana? What defines a level? Author just show that "I have more points with gun so i am E rank now".Wtf is this?. In all honestly Author just want to make his MC Over Powered. He didn't even put a good restrictions in developers.

MorningWood_Dao:kinda agree with this. as for Developer vs Player. i think the author explain it like: it's all talent. that's it. just like Chinese cultivation (heaven root, earth root, human root) as for ratio, about 1 dev : 1000 player : 100000 normies (assumption)
MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

it was shown that, normal player need super long time to increase their mana, a c rank player only have 20 mana. but that doesn't mean they're weaker than a 200 mana developer. i think it was talked about before mc went into hunting (he talked with his bodyguard who can control fire). having more mana only mean having more fuel. the power is based on control and experience.

Aman_Gupta_1277:I was thinking, what only developers can make game? More Mana? So in later stage don't players have enough Mana? What defines a level? Author just show that "I have more points with gun so i am E rank now".Wtf is this?. In all honestly Author just want to make his MC Over Powered. He didn't even put a good restrictions in developers.
MorningWood_Dao
MorningWood_DaoLv5

the think about "i have more point now in guns so I'm E rank" is confusing. that part haven't been explained well. we know mana pool define dev's rank, but author never explained it well with player's. my only assumption is, they can see their own skill rank. so, they saw that their F-rank guns skill is upgraded to E-Rank, or any combat related skill or maybe highest ranked skill they have. that's why they said they're E-Rank now. also an increase of 1 mana point from F to E.

Aman_Gupta_1277:I was thinking, what only developers can make game? More Mana? So in later stage don't players have enough Mana? What defines a level? Author just show that "I have more points with gun so i am E rank now".Wtf is this?. In all honestly Author just want to make his MC Over Powered. He didn't even put a good restrictions in developers.
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