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this book is nice and creative I loved the character portrayal the writer sure have put thought into every aspect and details it seems, there are few things that can improved such as transitions but those aside it is literally a book one could enjoy with a cup of coffee thanks author

The writing needs a little improve but above all the novel is really clear and well written.. didn't expect I will come to read this novel (secret) Thank you Author...

Interesting plot, and interesting characters. I'm wondering how the MC (Alsi) will proceed through his new, reincarnated life, and how it will end. It's exciting!

I have actually just gotten through the first three chapters and I have to say, the MC is really one selfish dude. Plus on top of that he wants to rule the world 😂. I will have to say, I am looking forward to seeing how this story goes. Probably he might improve as a human being later on. I also wish for the grammatical errors to be fixed author, but you have my 5 stars

The plot is very interesting and builds image around the characters personality and what stands out for me the most is that the MC is very funny and has good interactions. definitely engaging in the first 2 chapters for me!

The plot is unique and characters are pretty amazing. Mc has a well quite a personality but that's something intresting to look forward to. Deities and magic - lots of possibilities of cool fights. Author is really good in painting a live picture of any situation. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 😊

The story looks like it left quite a bit of mystery. The worldbuilding is interesting to read. It would be interesting if I can read the lore behind each character.

The story has a good pace to it. the backgrounds and characters are well described. Interesting premise for an MC who some might not root for but that's the beauty of it. Although, there are some typos that needs checking, as it may pull out some readers from the experience.

Nice work dude. I like how the crowd interactions are not bland at all and have some colour in them. It depicts how much effort you have put in. I also love the place where you write the expressions in bracket to make the reader understand. Simple but effective writing. Keep up the good work bruh.

Writing quality is top notch, very intelligent. Good one author, the character design, hmm...Great too, but I feel there's a need to still dive deeper into the characters, well might be too early too point that out since the book us just starting. The world background is cool too but needs more light, I like the idea of leaving everything to the reader's imagination but I like some guides to imagination hence necessary informations make it enjoyable. I love the the story overall, I love that story development is also straight to the point. I will definitely recommend this, it'll kill away your time without you knowing it.

one big funny MC I can't stop laughing on reading the first chapter the way he respond to the girls who are fighting over I kinda wonder what they will do now he's gone from their world nice work author

Pretty dang good, yo. It got better as you progressed. I had a pretty lol experience because each character, to me, I either LOVED or HATED. Overall tho, I’ve been enjoying thus far. The pacing is pretty good. I really liked how we just got into the story in a relatively quick manner, and not taking sooooo long to get to the stuff we wanted. You will lol a couple times with how the MC will handle a situation😂. Was also impressed with how symbols were used with intention. for example, the color schemes of characters seem to have a purpose to them. Fun story all around. Enjoying it thus far. The only qualm id have, for the purpose of the review, is that sometimes I felt like paragraphs were waaay too long. Not that this is an issue though.. I’m just used to reading light novels with much shorter paragraphs. Looking forward a to seeing how this story goes.

Great book, the story is fun to read and the Mc is hilarious because of his need to rule the world and I can sense his character is going to develop further and I like that the story is still going on and being updated🔥

This book is amazing! The first thing I noticed was how different it felt. I didn’t even know it was an isekai novel until I read the tag. The descriptions are vivid and beautiful. The lead character is really not a great person, but I’ve gotten to the point in the book where I’m seeing shimmers of his better self showing. The story looks extremely promising abd I want to know mare about the characters that are being introduced. The mystery is very well written and the worldbuilding is woven into the narrative very well. Excellent work, author! 🔥🔥❤️❤️⭐️⭐️

Interesting story with wonderful character despite the MC being a selfish and self-centered dude. I am curious to know about the MC journey after he reincarnated. The world building is good. Great work author !![img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend]

I have to say it’s interesting. What I like most is the character development. It was great, I like the way you gave them life and their own characteristics.

I think this has a lot of potential, the world building is great, and I can't wait to see how the magic system is handled later down the line. I will say I'm not the biggest fan of this brand of isekai and the fanservice bits aren't for me. It's a big power fantasy but I suppose there's nothing wrong with that. Despite that the descriptions are vivid, it's easy to picture, and overall I can see the amount of love and dedication you have for this project.

Really liked the MC, usually authors make main charachters with relateable backgrounds and personalities,It is definitely more challenging for the author to make the audience care about characters that go beyond the hero cliché and have flaws like a normal human being; the progression is very good with a comfortable pace to read without throwing too much information in the reader's face.

I love the characters and the story is a good one. The plot is amazing and the main character is hilarious The story just keeps getting better the more I read Definitely adding it to my library ,good work.

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