this book is nice and creative I loved the character portrayal the writer sure have put thought into every aspect and details it seems, there are few things that can improved such as transitions but those aside it is literally a book one could enjoy with a cup of coffee thanks author

The writing needs a little improve but above all the novel is really clear and well written.. didn't expect I will come to read this novel (secret) Thank you Author...

Interesting plot, and interesting characters. I'm wondering how the MC (Alsi) will proceed through his new, reincarnated life, and how it will end. It's exciting!

I have actually just gotten through the first three chapters and I have to say, the MC is really one selfish dude. Plus on top of that he wants to rule the world 😂. I will have to say, I am looking forward to seeing how this story goes. Probably he might improve as a human being later on. I also wish for the grammatical errors to be fixed author, but you have my 5 stars

The plot is very interesting and builds image around the characters personality and what stands out for me the most is that the MC is very funny and has good interactions. definitely engaging in the first 2 chapters for me!

The plot is unique and characters are pretty amazing. Mc has a well quite a personality but that's something intresting to look forward to. Deities and magic - lots of possibilities of cool fights. Author is really good in painting a live picture of any situation. 5 🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟 😊

The story looks like it left quite a bit of mystery. The worldbuilding is interesting to read. It would be interesting if I can read the lore behind each character.

The story has a good pace to it. the backgrounds and characters are well described. Interesting premise for an MC who some might not root for but that's the beauty of it. Although, there are some typos that needs checking, as it may pull out some readers from the experience.

Nice work dude. I like how the crowd interactions are not bland at all and have some colour in them. It depicts how much effort you have put in. I also love the place where you write the expressions in bracket to make the reader understand. Simple but effective writing. Keep up the good work bruh.

Writing quality is top notch, very intelligent. Good one author, the character design, hmm...Great too, but I feel there's a need to still dive deeper into the characters, well might be too early too point that out since the book us just starting. The world background is cool too but needs more light, I like the idea of leaving everything to the reader's imagination but I like some guides to imagination hence necessary informations make it enjoyable. I love the the story overall, I love that story development is also straight to the point. I will definitely recommend this, it'll kill away your time without you knowing it.