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No, at all, this is not a long paragraph. Orderly criticisms like this are the reason why I am getting better no matter how slow it may seem. My skill as a writer over the last year, which includes, character relation exploration definitely is not at where it used to be after reading this, although I had started incorporating it in the last 20 to 30 chapters after receiving the complaints myself, I do have a plan for the book but I think my plan must have been too inconsiderate for readers, so yes I am switching things up. Thank you very much, and I can only ask that if you do note more inconsistencies, do not hesitate to bring it to my knowledge. Thank you!
Yea, I do agree with you. Most of Northern's interaction with everyone has been on a surface level. And the people he had some sort of seemingly friendship with, he has a grudge with them. This grudge is what even allows him to be closed and reluctant to relationships. But all of that will slowly change as we move forward because of the variable that just appeared. Thank you for noting this, I am actively working to deepen the character development, and everyone will see it play out through the plot.
no, they don't. It was a mistake
3. same answer, formless
2. Well, yes, I will build on that as we move on
1. Northern initially had a soul essence before it got converted to void essence because of the influence of void. but I know what you're talking about. The answer is Formless. I think I explained it in one of the chapters, it would still be explored more as Northern meets more warrior. It's difficult for Northern’s essence to gain a form, because one, he does not work on the concept of soul core, and we also know that the absence of a soul core essentially means he is formless
I'm so sorry. It's all Shin's fault and my fault, too, for creating such a dumb guy. But if it's any consolation at all. He does realize much later that he has a cooler name.
Thanks a bunch!!
like privilege?
Thank you, I have begun working on it in fact, I'm sure you will see progress as in later chapters. Do commend me if you indeed notice em and if not, do not hesitate to bring my attention to once again.