Essence of it All (DxD Essence Meta CYOA)

Nothing to see here. Just your average author giving himself 5 stars. Just something to know: This was the first fic I ever wrote. I think it has some good and bad parts, but overall, I'm happy with it. I hope you enjoy reading it!

Alone that he was reincarnated as a peerage member is a no go for me. He is a slave now. And that should not be possible as he has king essence and should be op. Alone the potential of his blank essence should hinder every reincarnation attempt. It should not even be possible for lucifer (rias brother) to reincarnate him. I didnt read further than that so it could be a good story for those who like a mc that is a slave

Read this if you want an overpowered MC that is a slave and a cuck .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. .. .. .. .. ... .. ..

The truth is a bit disappointing, apart from so much power for nothing, almost everything is very forced.

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just advice lad, try to retwork your fanfic. make your fanfic more reasonable with common sense. with this current plot, i doubt author will finish this fanfic spectacularry. well, except youre try to make 'wish-fullfull fanfic'/'lack of logic fanfic' as for reference, try to read fanfic "deal with devil" on fanfiction net.

dont read it the 2 chapter I'm reading and the mc is already bowing to Rias. and ready to enter her peerage

read chapter 22, there is no ntr in the story (I want to believe) but if you have vibes of that, so this is a small warning, since there may be more of those situations in the future, read that chapter and decide if you continue (or start) Good luck bro

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The story is overall average especially when it comes to this CYOA set in DxD. It doesn't really bring anything new or different. Even his personality and just how he acts feels like very nonchalant in how he engages with other characters. Just a little bit of motivation, a change in the personality or anything at all woupd have made him memorable but it doesn't. I wouldn't say its a bad story, just the same old story that has been told countless times.

Essences are nerfed. Mc is pathetic and has no common sense, as does the author. below average/below average/below average/below average/below average/below average

Piece of advice to a new author like you, you must take into account the powers given to the mc. The king essence exemplifies what a true king is and under no circumstance will having an essence like The king, that influences the mc will ever be a peerage member of someone. If The king was not part of the package it will have being possible. Apart from that, for a new writer, it is very good. Thank you.

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Okay where do I start? This story isn't bad and I particularly liked the reference to warhammer, the only thing I didn't understand was how a demon stank the goddess tiamat in morals this doesn't make sense since she's dead but I turn a blind eye to it, I really I don't understand this hatred for the rias it's the guy's life if he wants to be a pawn that is, not to mention that this is a quick way to make a harem and not like he was a slave, he doesn't seem to care, I would particularly like that he was a son of zeus or a grandson but that's because i like greek mythology and i hope you do a story based on greek mythology with a son of zeus as the protagonist, not greek mythology fanfics and i think that could get a lot of attention, i just think the humans reading this story are too emotional emotionally to read a story with their mouths shut and only criticize at the end, and i find the beginning confusing but i'll also turn a blind eye to that too.

Fried Frog's Legs recipe: Delicious fried frog legs! This simple recipe involves coating frog legs with cracker crumbs and cornmeal, then briefly frying them in oil for a tender and crispy treat. Ingredients: 24 frog legs, skin removed 1 cup all-purpose flour ½ cup cornmeal 1 (4 ounce) packet saltine crackers, crushed 1 tablespoon ground black pepper 2 teaspoons salt 1 teaspoon minced onion 2 eggs ½ cup milk 2 cups vegetable oil for frying 1 cup peanut oil for frying Cooking Instructions: Step 1. Rinse frog legs and pat dry; set aside. Combine flour, cornmeal, saltine cracker crumbs, pepper, salt, and onion in a large resealable bag; shake well to mix. Whisk eggs and milk together in a shallow bowl. Step 2. Heat vegetable oil and peanut oil in a large skillet over medium-high heat. The oil should be about 1/2 inch deep. Step 3. Dip legs into egg mixture in batches, then press into cracker mixture until evenly coated. Place the breaded legs, unstacked, onto a plate. Repeat with remaining legs. Step 4. Lower breaded legs carefully into the hot oil in batches. Fry until golden brown, about 4 to 5 minutes on each side. Transfer to a paper towel-lined plate to drain. Repeat with remaining frog legs. Enjoy fellow frog eater enjoyers.

I love this fic, but if you do a rework already keep a spare copy of the current one. It would be nice to look back at this version if you do. Great potential lies within this one.

bueno, solo puedo decir, que el desarrollo de la historia está interesante hasta el momento, los personajes son buenos y la mezcla que hizo me gustó, la estabilidad de actualizaciones es lo que más me ha gustado y el contexto general de la trama, pues que esperas es un buen +18 con historia.

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