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Gideon

Gideon

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I love to read good stuff 馃槏

2017-09-15 JoinedIndonesia
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  • Gideon
    Gideon28d
    Posted

    I like how light it feels when I read this story. Honestly it's a bit slow on the first few chapters but then it starts to develop it's story. Honestly it's a little too stingy for the chapter length which is a good and a bad thing on this more ish novel.

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    CEO'S DESIRED LOVE
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Posted

    I can't wait to see more about it. It's even better if the author tidies it up a little bit because it looks kinda messy for now. Other than that, I have nothing worth mentioning.

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    the wind girl
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Posted

    Heya, I'm this book's author. Because I'm a new writer, I have almost no experience on writing novel before. I'd like to know if there's a room for improvement for me. PS: I haven't do another round of editing on older version. I planned to do it once it's done.

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    Future World Orders
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Commented

    It's kinda short. I wish it has more duration into it. I like the story in itself. Definitely worth to wait if it's not too long ;)

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    The Wanted Sixty-Four
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Replied to XplorerDudeYT

    thanks dude

    Ch 1 Life on current age
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    Future World Orders
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Posted

    It's a neat novel there. I somehow think it's similar to one novel that I used to read back then in 2014. It truly brings back my old memory. Great work. Keep it up!

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    Work has been licensed to Popink
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Replied to Proteety_Promi

    thanks a lot. I got that suggestion a lot from my forum as well. I'll improve it on future content.

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    Future World Orders
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Replied to SEP1A

    Thanks, I'll work on my English :)

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    Future World Orders
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  • Gideon
    Gideon2mth
    Posted

    It reminds me of a kind of water world game I've played. As for the story and the other aspects are well thought of. It's a good job you've done there.

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    Devil Child
    LGBT+SEP1A
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    It's an interesting transmigration novel. I hope it may entertain me long enough unlike some other novels out there. Well, I like the concept that the author trying to put here tbh. Can't wait for more!

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    Calamity is clumsy
    Eastern Fantasymathepid
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    That's a funny way to kick a story. I hope he retains his writing style since it's hard to find a fun comedy-like novel. It's my luck that I found this novel out of nowhere after browsing for some moments. What bliss!

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    Evolution to GOD
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    Even though his plot is superb, I feel like this book is still far from reaching its potential. I hope the author can choose a clear style of writing this novel in the future. I find some dialogues are having less explanation and took me a long time to realize who is who.

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    INFINITY MAN SYSTEM
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    That's another OP MC category on the list. I wonder how OP will MC becomes in the near future since he's pretty OP already. Maybe he'll be the next Saitama's rival in terms of power? you'll never know.

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    Omnipotent Destroyer
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    What an amazing fantasy story! I can't wait to know more about MC's future. that's a cool story to have while sipping my coffee in the morning.

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    Charlie Mutton - Gifted
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    That's an interesting romance novel with a futuristic style background. It's interesting to read it so far. I hope the author will continue to entertain me with such an amazing story. Well Done! PS: The only thing I don't like that it has short chapters

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    The World : 2099
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    Finally I found another Isekai kind of VRMMORPG theme again. I hope this will keep me interested on it. I managed to hook me so far and I hope it's author will retain it's quality and improve it to another level![img=recommend]

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    ENVISAGE
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Replied to Cup_of_Coffe

    that's my plan tbh

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    Future World Orders
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    That's a great fantasy novel for all fans out there. What an unexpected surprise! It really catches my attention with such an intense feeling in a good build world. What splendid work!

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    Can A Demon Lord Fall In Love
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    Another cool type of sci-fi. Hope the MC will find his way to overcome his ordeal somehow. I truly can't wait for its continuation. Hope it'll continue and quench my curiosity about what will happen next.

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    My Slaughter System
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  • Gideon
    Gideon3mth
    Posted

    That's a good story. You managed to get my curiosity to stay reading your story there. I enjoy how you describe your character there. It's a rather slow build so it's recommended for those who enjoy that particular kind of pace. Well done.

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    Beyond The Eyes
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