I like how light it feels when I read this story. Honestly it's a bit slow on the first few chapters but then it starts to develop it's story. Honestly it's a little too stingy for the chapter length which is a good and a bad thing on this more ish novel.

I can't wait to see more about it. It's even better if the author tidies it up a little bit because it looks kinda messy for now. Other than that, I have nothing worth mentioning.

Heya, I'm this book's author. Because I'm a new writer, I have almost no experience on writing novel before. I'd like to know if there's a room for improvement for me. PS: I haven't do another round of editing on older version. I planned to do it once it's done.

It's kinda short. I wish it has more duration into it. I like the story in itself. Definitely worth to wait if it's not too long ;)

thanks dude

It's a neat novel there. I somehow think it's similar to one novel that I used to read back then in 2014. It truly brings back my old memory. Great work. Keep it up!

thanks a lot. I got that suggestion a lot from my forum as well. I'll improve it on future content.

Thanks, I'll work on my English :)

It reminds me of a kind of water world game I've played. As for the story and the other aspects are well thought of. It's a good job you've done there.

It's an interesting transmigration novel. I hope it may entertain me long enough unlike some other novels out there. Well, I like the concept that the author trying to put here tbh. Can't wait for more!

That's a funny way to kick a story. I hope he retains his writing style since it's hard to find a fun comedy-like novel. It's my luck that I found this novel out of nowhere after browsing for some moments. What bliss!

Even though his plot is superb, I feel like this book is still far from reaching its potential. I hope the author can choose a clear style of writing this novel in the future. I find some dialogues are having less explanation and took me a long time to realize who is who.

That's another OP MC category on the list. I wonder how OP will MC becomes in the near future since he's pretty OP already. Maybe he'll be the next Saitama's rival in terms of power? you'll never know.

What an amazing fantasy story! I can't wait to know more about MC's future. that's a cool story to have while sipping my coffee in the morning.

That's an interesting romance novel with a futuristic style background. It's interesting to read it so far. I hope the author will continue to entertain me with such an amazing story. Well Done! PS: The only thing I don't like that it has short chapters

Finally I found another Isekai kind of VRMMORPG theme again. I hope this will keep me interested on it. I managed to hook me so far and I hope it's author will retain it's quality and improve it to another level![img=recommend]

that's my plan tbh

That's a great fantasy novel for all fans out there. What an unexpected surprise! It really catches my attention with such an intense feeling in a good build world. What splendid work!

Another cool type of sci-fi. Hope the MC will find his way to overcome his ordeal somehow. I truly can't wait for its continuation. Hope it'll continue and quench my curiosity about what will happen next.

That's a good story. You managed to get my curiosity to stay reading your story there. I enjoy how you describe your character there. It's a rather slow build so it's recommended for those who enjoy that particular kind of pace. Well done.