Abdoul_4756

are you still updating?

and also you talk about every little detail about each character example you would go into unnecessary amount of detail about how maybe adam nodded his head pr how he was was walking, im not trying to criticise you im just giving my point of view as a reader

i’ve liked it so far but if i had to pick one thing that i don’t like is that every 1 action you write about then you talk about the feelings of every present of the scene , i know its necessary to write about the feelings of your character but you are just writing about their feelings too much that there is little action

please come back

please come back 😭🙏

please come back

please come back

please come back [img=Yay]

is it going too come back? i like it very much and it has a lot of potential

is it going too come back or is it being uploaded somewhere else?