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Malyjax1mthReplied to Blue_PizzaThe man’s doin his best lol! Definitely could have had a stronger word choice though… I’ll make a note of that
Instead of governing land or workers, he put his efforts into governing the students at Wondant. Apart from the few times he was called to battle, he spent almost every moment of his life attempting to help the students as a school overseer.- Malyjax1mthReplied to BlakLord
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Don't worry, it's gonna get even worse
The voice in Kaos's head mentally snapped back, "EASY FOR YOU TO SAY, MAYBE YOUR WISH MAKES THE IMPOSSIBLE POSSIBLE, BUT MINE DOESN'T. WE CAN ONLY DO ONE THING SO GO. TRY! RUN! HIDE! FIGHT! ASDFNAPSEUFB…" The voice got nonsensical and garbled and just began yelling discontentedly at him. - Malyjax1mthReplied to Snapdragon_1kVotes
Yeah….. Maybe I lowballed it on the age a bit, but a lot of the story is going to rely on Kaos and Sepra having known each other for a long time, so I figured it was the best option. I tried to keep them talking a little more like kids in the chapter, and have all the fights be more crude slugfests, kinda how ten year olds would really fight, but maybe I coulda done something different with it
Ch 14 Back in the Day Part 2: Promise - Malyjax1mthReplied to Snapdragon_1kVotesCh 12 All Friends
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While supports aren’t useless in mid combat, their use is usually as post combat medics or doctors. A big drawback is they easily get eliminated and are too difficult to protect during arena games for it to be worth it
Although the environment of Wondant was a lot better than most schools, there was still a distinct hierarchy, and he was currently at the bottom of it, in the Sen class of general magic. Just above them was the Kin class of magic engineering, and slightly above that was the Den class of support magic, which was the one that he had been encouraged to join. - Malyjax1mthReplied to iliacube
The Support class doesn’t get to use the basic combat facilities, guess I should have explained that better
Although the environment of Wondant was a lot better than most schools, there was still a distinct hierarchy, and he was currently at the bottom of it, in the Sen class of general magic. Just above them was the Kin class of magic engineering, and slightly above that was the Den class of support magic, which was the one that he had been encouraged to join. - Malyjax1mthReplied to ItzNeedlessCh -1 Skeleton Hands - pilot chapter
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So it’s obviously me writing my own review, but I just wanted to talk about the stuff I wrote a bit in a place that wasn’t just the end of chapter comments. I am writing this, because I love reading fantasy manga and light novels. I create video games as a hobby, and as a part of my hobby became my job, I guess I needed something else, and this is just a way that I can try and be creative and learn something new. I gave it 5 stars because I am trying my best, and honestly I don’t cringe when I read my own chapters (totally thought I would, but I actually like my characters) if you have any feedback or suggestions, please leave comments on the chapters to help me learn more about what is actually good writing, and what is just something really lame, anyway… hope you enjoy it!