Malyjax

Lmk what y’all think about this one, hopefully gonna have some fun stuff next chapter

Quick update: Thanks to the few people that read it! I'm working to get a chapter 2 ASAP, but I really do appreciate feedback and definitely need it!

Just wanted to put this here as a disclaimer, that I'm writing this mainly for fun, but I still want to learn to be a better writer so feedback is appreciated!

let me know if you guys have any thoughts on this or any feedback!

The man’s doin his best lol! Definitely could have had a stronger word choice though… I’ll make a note of that

Already on it!

Well… they probably shouldn’t allow that…

Don't worry, it's gonna get even worse

I freaking hate this new scrolling system, I liked the up and down version, what’s the deal with this stupid left right scrolling?

Yeah….. Maybe I lowballed it on the age a bit, but a lot of the story is going to rely on Kaos and Sepra having known each other for a long time, so I figured it was the best option. I tried to keep them talking a little more like kids in the chapter, and have all the fights be more crude slugfests, kinda how ten year olds would really fight, but maybe I coulda done something different with it