i have to say when I read this review I was dubious about this book but I have to say the story so far(on chapter 65) is about average but the ravens man they are so entertaining every time i feel like I am getting bored bam here comes the raven they just make this so fun to read not to mention how strange the other animals are getting but i love it.

to answer your other question I have left hints in the actual story to it's answer although not obvious i plan for this to be long so anything is possible I may even take suggestions if i think it will fit with the story I have planned.

i added that but i have not read any of the extra stuff only played the games so they may have with how insane Halsey is if she could make Spartans I am sure given enough time she could do it

there will be but at the moment the MC is Numb to emotions due to the experiments on his body however as his path goes on this will change him

I wanted her alive and not crazy because she is important to the Halo universe even if events have changed she is still important to the universe itself and I liked Cortana from the first three games

that depends on the tech used as forerunner ships are able to destroy each other but human tech is not enough but I know what you mean i should have gone into more detail but every ship has the same weakness its engine no matter how advanced if you shoot directly into it's exhaust you will cause damage but you are right about the ship itself is true unless you have the same or better tech than the forerunners it's impossible to damage the ship by shooting it normally but thanks for pointing out that i did not specify on how the key ship was disabled.

I can now confirm that Chapter 30 has 1370 words without the Author Notes at the top and bottom of the chapter I may still increase this count in the next chapter but I am afraid of making it drag too much so I will try to find a sweat spot where it's long enough but does not feel like a drag on what could have been done with much less words

ok thanks for the advice I can make the latest chapters longer but will have to be from chapters 30 and after since I have already finished writing up to chapter 29 and uploaded it to patreon and thanks for reading.

thanks for the suggestion as for the power scaling marvel would be impossible as if I base it with any comic stuff then theres no way to survive but if it's the movies then the powers are not as strong as they should be as for mass effect and star wars both have similar tech level so i could do them but for Warhammer i have never played any of the material works so i have no chance but if i decide to include more universes I will have to make it progressive so each universe has to be stronger than the last but if you guys want that they i can try will have to do research on some things to get it to work but I would rather it enjoyable read than the same stuff over and over.

Thank you for the suggestion if you would not mind can you show an example I would appreciate it.