Review Detail of Lordmoonlight in The Spartan who became a God

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LordmoonlightLv55mthLordmoonlight

It’s a ok fic you need a editor thou couple spelling mistakes but that’s all really could use longer chapters thou

The Spartan who became a God

LuciferDark

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LuciferDarkAuthorLuciferDark

I can now confirm that Chapter 30 has 1370 words without the Author Notes at the top and bottom of the chapter I may still increase this count in the next chapter but I am afraid of making it drag too much so I will try to find a sweat spot where it's long enough but does not feel like a drag on what could have been done with much less words

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LuciferDarkAuthorLuciferDark

ok thanks for the advice I can make the latest chapters longer but will have to be from chapters 30 and after since I have already finished writing up to chapter 29 and uploaded it to patreon and thanks for reading.

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