It’s a ok fic you need a editor thou couple spelling mistakes but that’s all really could use longer chapters thou
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LIKEI can now confirm that Chapter 30 has 1370 words without the Author Notes at the top and bottom of the chapter I may still increase this count in the next chapter but I am afraid of making it drag too much so I will try to find a sweat spot where it's long enough but does not feel like a drag on what could have been done with much less words