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I know even i am not happy with this chapter and even plan to rewrite it eventually although the information in it is important I should really have mixed something else with the info dump.

i could have but Transformers have individuality Geth can operate on their own without the central Geth intelligence just not very effectively this is what makes them an easier race to find a solution to control them. the main problem is the universe itself the republic would have never allowed a material that could create mechanical life to be available and getting it from the system in quantities needed to make a large amount of transformers would be both expensive in the system points. as for why not terminators instead according to the info on them the materials used to make them would not exist or be heavily protected even in the corrupt republic. although both these mechanical races are good choices they have many problems too transformers for there individuality and terminators for the need to limit their learning since they can essentially learns to the point they are no different from humans. no to mention acording to cannon of terminator despite John Connors Destiny even if he is removed another takes his place. as for why transformers individuality can be a problem Megatron is a perfect example. and in the movies the once leader of the Autobots betrayed them. so i went with Geth easier to explain and less prone to cause problems if they eventually rebel since they spent most of their time in isolation untill the reapers contacted them. I hope this explains why Geth, i had thought of transformers but even if I try it's not gonna end well if I did despite the fact it would be cool to have an actual spaceship thats actually a transformer.

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Author here informing you that Vol 2 is finished and uploaded on patreon also i will be going through all the chapters on patreon as someone informed me that the paragraph are difficult to read since they are long and have no pause in them. So I will be going through ether separating them or adding commas to make them easier to read this will inevitably delay my time on writing Vol 3, which unlike my original plan will be Dark going back to the halo universe to retrieve some Forerunner tech this was originally supposed to be after the clone wars but I realised it made more sense to happen before since there will not be much time between the empire beginning its conquest of the galaxy. Anyway I hope you enjoy the story I will be uploading 2 chapters for Vol 2 every Tuesday hopefully before I am done i have made the correction on Patreon and can shift the changes to here after then focus on Vol 3.

thanks for telling me I had no idea that there was text to speech anyway I have gone through chapter 1 and tried to make the paragraph less large I originally planned to go over them again after i finish vol 2 but i thought that i should at least attempt the first chapter now after seeing this review. I have also tried to keep the chapter I have done recently to have paragraphs that are not so large as i stated i am not only writing this I am also reading it over constantly. the reviews are important as I know my writing skills are bad but pointing out issues i can improve on will help me so I thank you for pointing this out to me.

Author here I know updates have not been as often as I had originally intended a lot has been happening in real life but I have already got up to chapter 54 written and uploaded to patreon. I will be releasing 2 chapters on here every Tuesday but patreon will get more and will always be ahead but I make a promise I will be ensuring that I release at least 2 chapters every week I uploaded 3 last week because of my absence I Thought 2 chapters was not enough content to make up for the time I was away but from this review it will be 2 every Tuesday. all chapters will also contain more than 1200 words so that's 2400 words every Tuesday. I appreciate those who stayed during my absence and hope you enjoy the story.

i have to say when I read this review I was dubious about this book but I have to say the story so far(on chapter 65) is about average but the ravens man they are so entertaining every time i feel like I am getting bored bam here comes the raven they just make this so fun to read not to mention how strange the other animals are getting but i love it.

to answer your other question I have left hints in the actual story to it's answer although not obvious i plan for this to be long so anything is possible I may even take suggestions if i think it will fit with the story I have planned.

i added that but i have not read any of the extra stuff only played the games so they may have with how insane Halsey is if she could make Spartans I am sure given enough time she could do it