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Kiss_melani

Kiss_melani

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Give me all your loves and supports .let's win this together.

2023-10-09 JoinedGlobal
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani6mth
    Replied to QuinnKey

    thanks for the honest review 😌.I re-read it and edit it.Writing a book is super hard 😂,I will practice till I'm perfect .

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    This is no longer a book anymore
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani6mth
    Posted

    Your first story ? ,Yet you write well .Leo not being able to express himself to Sarah is sad but who knows ,all for the best.There is a saying that what kills a man is a woman .Leo sacrificing himself for Sarah is mind-blowing and crazy !Though,if he didn't do that,he'd probably live the rest of his life in regrets ,after all, he went to the party because of her.I was confused on what a Teror is but Elanor explanation clarify it .I was like wow ,that girl is good 👍.This story is nice.Also, I thought Leo would struggle with his daily task like 200 push up or so.But he did them ,just like that ? .I screamed reading the daily task , Well not everyone is lazy like me 😂.Kudos author .let's go kick more terror a$$.

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    Tech Demon System
    Sci-fi · NAO_Cosmic
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani6mth
    Commented

    Alex or Leo ?

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    Tech Demon System
    Sci-fi · NAO_Cosmic
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani6mth
    Posted

    Giving up five stars! Tony and his dad is sooo wicked! Why are they executing innocent people like chickens ?I also think it's a bad idea for Janet mum to confront the Alpha king ,who does that ?She should have maybe confronted Tony in school or elsewhere but in the palace ? NO.I cannot imagine the hatred ,and anger boiling in Janet 🥺.And for Leroy ,I think he is nice ,still watching him though .I must say I'm hooked ,Added it to my library already 💛.I hope their escape plan is successful .Kudos Author .

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    Rejected By The Cruel Alpha
    Fantasy · NDUKWE
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Replied to SeraphWedd

    Thank you for your honest review I will work on it and improve .

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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    First, the cover is 💛💛💛.I love it.captivating synopsis .interesting story I'm definitely adding this to my library.

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    Gaia Project
    Fantasy · EpiCreatoR
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Love the introductory part , I felt the emotion of the mc like I was the one going through it.The identify of the Mc wasn't revealed at first ,I was really curious , 😂 lol.Nice story definitely adding it to my library .

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    Fantasy · QuinnKey
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    First ,nice cover 💛.second , just a click in the book ,I'm loving it ,I'm addicted .

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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Love the introduction it's easy to flow with .I was hooked from chapter one till ....Adding it to my library immediately wouldn't want to miss this good book .more ink to your pen author .

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    SERendiPiTy
    Urban · MARYAMjk
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Replied to Bliss_Fullover

    Thank you you should add it to your library to be updated when I post

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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Here we are with another exciting story .Well-written description and dialogues .Im curious to know what will happen in the next chapter .

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    DEMON IN DISGUISE
    Fantasy · Debbiewrites
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Well written synopsis.Cover is a little bit weird ,may overlook the book by the cover but damn ! This book is literally good 👍.Diving into Gideon life ,it's sad witnessing one's family die ,not once ,not twice .....cruel fate 🥺.Curious to know how Gideon will fight it .kudos author

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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Good title and cover .I love kpop stories 💛💛💛.I was a little bit confused with the change of pov but I adjusted and flow with the story .I love the dialogues and description easy to read and understand, more ink to your pen author.

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    The Crazy Couple
    Fantasy · cute_baby_phoenix
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Another interesting story 💯.The title hell in heaven brought my attention a click on it and I'm all hooked.More ink to your pen author ,no one is perfect so keep going.

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    Hell in Heaven: The devil incarnate.
    Fantasy · blissfullover99
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    interesting story 💯.I flow with the story easily it is well-written with easy dialogues .my new Addiction 😌

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    ReWorld: The DwarfCat-earedElf
    Fantasy · UelUel
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Apocalyptic and videogames? 💙💙💙.These are kinda rare and well-written. I love your breakdown of paragraphs, it's easy to follow and understand. The use of onomatopoeia is lit ✅.You describe those sounds well. Expecting more updates author.

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    Planet Apocalypse: Revolution
    Urban · Gebe
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Commented

    Nice introduction 💙

    -[30 mins Earlier]
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    Planet Apocalypse: Revolution
    Urban · Gebe
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Nice story 💯.I love how the boys fought for their love despite challenges and society judgement.I can feel Samuel reading the story ,the critics from his parents, brother and friends.I give this book a must read 😌.

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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Replied to ThreyaMidnight

    Thank you for the honest review, I will work on those.

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    Fantasy · Kiss_melani
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  • Kiss_melani
    Kiss_melani7mth
    Posted

    Definitely adding it to my library. Love Sirian vibes. The description is well written making me flow with the story naturally. Its like a movie and I'm in it. Give this book a thump up, I just started but I can't stop reading it, curious to know what will happen next.

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