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Your first story ? ,Yet you write well .Leo not being able to express himself to Sarah is sad but who knows ,all for the best.There is a saying that what kills a man is a woman .Leo sacrificing himself for Sarah is mind-blowing and crazy !Though,if he didn't do that,he'd probably live the rest of his life in regrets ,after all, he went to the party because of her.I was confused on what a Teror is but Elanor explanation clarify it .I was like wow ,that girl is good 👍.This story is nice.Also, I thought Leo would struggle with his daily task like 200 push up or so.But he did them ,just like that ? .I screamed reading the daily task , Well not everyone is lazy like me 😂.Kudos author .let's go kick more terror a$$.