Review Detail of ThreyaMidnight in This is no longer a book anymore

I must say, I rarely encounter mermaid stories in WebNovel. When I do, however, they're usually good! This one proves the mermaid track record! Story-wise, this is a unique work and an enjoyable read! However, I noticed that the author's writing style can be improved (mainly for the usage of grammar, vocabulary, and punctations). But of course, this improved along their journey as a writer! Please keep up the good work!