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  • Dayruth_6754 hours ago
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    This is a review after reading only the first chapters The beginning of the story and the explanation of the world is very good, but the logic in the story is complete nonsense How can I be at the beginning of the story and the writer makes such nonsense The hero is supposed to be six years old living with his mother in the slums after his father left them five years ago The hero dropped out of school and has been working for five years so that he can collect the price of heavenly water To wake up the hero is six years old if he dropped out of school when he was one year old and started working in various freelance jobs while he was an infant to be able to collect the price of heavenly water? This is very important to me Will similar nonsense continue to appear like this or was it only once

  • Dayruth_67521 days ago
    Replied to Melda_Saitama

    If you have some good stories please pass on.

  • Dayruth_67522 days ago
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    This is a review after stopping at chapter 321. The banner is very good. In reality, the diversity of characters, the world building, the story and the narration. The writer is very creative in creating events and situations and making the characters alive and with their own thinking. I will drop it for now and I do not know when I might start it again because of the current arc that continued, if it was completely exaggerated, and it is still continuing. It is really very exaggerated. I need confirmation of this.

  • Dayruth_6753 months ago
    Replied to Assiddeeq

    4 years ago and only 7 chapters 🙂

  • Dayruth_6753 months ago
    Replied to Daoist_Paradox

    Thanks for your review, brother

  • Dayruth_6754 months ago
    Replied to Elyon

    Is there a romance or a harem like your other novel?

  • Dayruth_6754 months ago
    Replied to Awespec

    Hello, author. In any case, does the novel have a relationship with the unknown god, or more precisely, will you meet or meet the hero here, the Sasharu family from your other novel?

  • Dayruth_6754 months ago
    Replied to GLVI_h

    The other read a lot of Chinese novels until his mind became floating

  • Dayruth_6754 months ago
    Replied to md_rizvi

    I left it with the writer's actions greatly exaggerating the academy arc and the hero's training in a disgusting way

  • Dayruth_6754 months ago
    Replied to Reviewed

    Is it good? Is there a harem?