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D_Mystery2mthReplied to Maverick_sfxNo arguments, I'll take it as Author adding scenes into the plot
Starting with the First Hokage, the Senju clan has been constantly breaking up and assimilating into Konoha. By the Second Hokage, the Senju clan was basically reduced to just a few main families, and now...- D_Mystery5mthCommented
I'm 90% sure get name is nojiko
"Nokigao!" Nami looked at the young girl, paused, and then suddenly revealed a happy smile: "It's over, all the difficulties and sufferings are over!" " - D_Mystery8mthCommented
Author, totally destroyed the plot
Coughing and clearing her throat, the redhead cousin of Kushina glanced at the duo, her gaze getting a bit warmer as she found the two... a little known to each other already which set her heart at ease, "Kushina... be a good girl when you stay with Grandma Mito, yeah? We'll visit you every year but you have to learn new things here and make Uzushiogakure proud!" - D_Mystery8mthCommented
There's no military in Naruto even the police is for protection of the village (Uchiha) the other force is the Anbu which all Naruto fans knows. The only time you can see a Military like executives(General etc) is when it's war ps. Rarely formation, Only one/two(When a super kage and kage are in the war) General figure, nothing like lieutenants only Team leader. Almost all I typed may sound like the military but there's a stark difference and my main point is it's loose they are ninja's not soldier's they don't stand at attention, also not leisurely. If you get what I mean you can get a better understanding when writing a similar novel
One thing that they didn't show in the anime is that during war whether it is in the Naruto World or the real one, rules of the military are the same. Down from the designations to the rules and atmosphere, also the punishments you receive for not following the rules. - D_Mystery8mthCommented
Author, can you do this just write what happened once and for all. Don't just waste my/our time, also confusing us
[Previously:] - D_Mystery8mthCommented
Author, Are you purposely not showing the good parts 😏😏 of Lust Abilities if you know what I mean
7. Enhanced Beauty: Lust possesses a level of physical attractiveness above that of most humans, which she uses to manipulate weak-willed individuals for her purposes. - D_Mystery8mthCommented
Is feels like the older version of gato
This was intelligence provided by the bandits they had captured. - D_Mystery8mthCommented
Says one of the future main antagonist,even if he was being controlled
People with talent are so annoying. - D_Mystery8mthCommented
No No No, It's the 3rd hokage who ordered the senju's to go to war reducing their numbers. How could the 2nd Hokage SENJU Tobirama order the death of is own clan ps This H is used for good okage while this h is used for the bad ones
Starting with the First Hokage, the Senju clan has been constantly breaking up and assimilating into Konoha. By the Second Hokage, the Senju clan was basically reduced to just a few main families, and now... - D_Mystery9mthCommented
how is the head pierced with basis nails ??🧐🤔
After another painful wail, Tang Qi saw his body clearly. He was also wrapped in a layer of hazy light as he hung on a skeletal cross. There were a total of five sharp nails piercing into his head, wrists, and ankles, respectively. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
how is the head pierced with basis nails ??🧐🤔
After another painful wail, Tang Qi saw his body clearly. He was also wrapped in a layer of hazy light as he hung on a skeletal cross. There were a total of five sharp nails piercing into his head, wrists, and ankles, respectively. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
it's uru not ulu
Mark didn't believe that the scientists of S.H.I.E.L.D. could research anything useful. As long as they didn't know the role of Ulu metal in it, any research they conducted would inevitably lead to a failed outcome due to the wrong starting point. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
it should be"none" not no
"Duplicated talent: No." - D_Mystery9mthCommented
G...A....Y this is GAY talk
"Tsk. Still talking and acting as if you were so big. Did you still not get pummelled by my 'little spear' just yesterday night?" Murong Jing cast a disdainful eyes towards Yang Zun. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
bro it's only a few people in the senju clan, don't be mistaken because of Tsunade. Her techniques are owned by her the other senju don't have it you get
On the contrary the Senju clan would focus on physical energy when choosing the potential candidates to train. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
level 9 not 8
[Level]: Level 8 (304/3600) - D_Mystery9mthCommented
I am wrong this isn't wanda
"Wha-What are you talking about? Don't joke Kitty." Jean protested due to her shame. - D_Mystery9mthReplied to D_Mystery
Sorry I mean Wanda
"Hey Jean, why did you suddenly run away like that? You ran even faster than Pietro." A female voice came from the same direction that Jean had come running from. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
Let me guess Wands
"Hey Jean, why did you suddenly run away like that? You ran even faster than Pietro." A female voice came from the same direction that Jean had come running from. - D_Mystery9mthCommented
Author where are you I promise not to swear🤮😣
I arrived in front of Danzo's cell and found Danzo and Hiruzen naked on top of each other and their heads where facing…