Review Detail of Stardreamer12 in Monument of a Labyrinthine Individual

Wow, I like the way you wrote the story, especially your English. It was awesome and easy to understand. I also liked the way you described the story and portrayed the emotions of the characters and their backgrounds. However, I noticed that sometimes you didn't mention the name of the protagonist, which made me forget his name. The only names I remembered were Sofia and Sebastian. But overall, it was a good story. I especially liked chapter 3, which was full of emotion as the protagonist saw the corpse of Sebastian. If you update more often, you will probably gather many readers.