Review Detail of Stardreamer12 in Deleted 1993

Your story has a nice plot and good writing style. The vivid descriptions were great and I especially appreciated being able to imagine the scenes and expressions of the characters. For example, when you described how Ryan solved the question and how his teacher Mr. Johnson and classmates were shocked by his intelligence, it made me feel like I was really inside the scene. However, I feel that the dialogue was lacking and suggest that you incorporate more of it. Overall, your story had a good flow and will probably gather many readers with a little revision and more updates. Before concluding this review, I want to say good job to the author. You wrote a great story that I enjoyed and I am looking forward to more updates.