This is my first time to feel very disappointed to the core, this story has a good premise but sadly bad execution. I'm okay with cliche but will despite it when it being used too much, plus the author is over promoting their patreon. I mean sure it is your story but can you tone down the promotion? It's so annoying

Madao's (Is this Gintama reference?) work is a blessing from the heaven especially when I have a milk fetish. I hope that other Author will get inspired by this man and make them use the same concept of Milk = Power up. Keep up the good work Ossan 👍👍

I have to say despite the ridiculous and boring title the story is really unique. So far this is the most Unique Naruto fanfic that I had ever read. The character struggle feel so real and I didn't cringe on the dialogue part which are muah Amazing. I need more of this

Well I decided to check your DxD fanfic and I have to say that this is probably the Author best work. I can say he is master at doing a flashback and making a sad backstory - For now the story feel a bit generic but the Issei's revelation in chapter 8 kinda caught me off guard.

*character

It was a mixed feeling for me, the first pov writing wasn't really the best and from what I seen the author is better with 3rd pov. The MC was a bit meh and pretty bland to me, Issei actually feel like a better MC in comparison to the MC of this novel. Hope the MC will developed into a better chapter

Hard to get into but the characters are decent and pretty funny. Story is pretty repetitive but isn't that bad considering Author writing this for fun. What make it hard for me is the changing between perspective and the over introduce characters. This story also suffer from Shounen effect - Cool characters/villains appear only to turn into a punching *Cough* Jack *Cough*

I have nothing to say other than this is a good story. The writing and update quality is really good but the story kinda hard for me to get into at least at the first few chapters after that I have a blast reading this story. Issei also is an interesting characters in this one tbh. Also I love Milk

I want to do a backflip

After 4 Great Chapters...Yes this chapter is kind of disappointing but no one is perfect. Just try your best

This story gave me a rather mixed feeling, it have great start but it gradually become boring and boring to the point where I can't help but to yawn.

Isn't having flaws make you a flawed person?

Same here sometime I really want to punch Luke due to his stupidity but I think Luke is more indecisive and Selfishly Stupid while Luffy is Naively Stupid.

Honestly I like this kind of thing it just show how human the mc is. - Selfish - Over Emotional - Idiotic - Insecure Most of fanfic mc tend to be bland, kind and perfect while Luke here is so flawed. Almost drop this on last chapter but this chapter alone save this novel.

the heck is this? this is literally the best chapter ever. This fanfic from a normal enjoyable fanfic turn into a freaking great fanfic.

Too bad the story is being rewritten but it is what it is, I enjoyed reading this and can't help but to give a review for this story........

The story is quite interesting, the way how the author handle the System in different approach is refreshing maybe because I don't read much fanfic beside One Piece. The flaw of this story is it rather slow pace (Despite having 13 chapters the story is still in an introduction phase) and the lack of world building.

Ugh the heck is this? I read it and can't help but to be disappointed in the story. Smut Fanfic is good when you do it right but this story is doomed from the very beginning

This story is really great, I stopped at 10th chapters because I want to wait until this story reach over 100 chapters hope you won't drop it.

I'm a bit disappointed with this story because the writing is pretty bad. The main character is bland, and make feel unmotivated to follow his journey. But then again maybe I will give this an another chance.